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Reviews for The Birthday Present

By : SpikesEvilbint
  • From K.Blood on July 19, 2008
    Just finished with chapter 5. I wasn't so sure about Lindsey at first, but now I'm really starting to like his character more. Still can't say much for his father, though I might like him better if he had a broken bone or two, or a hundred. *hint, hint*

    Don't know why I'm the only one reviewing this story. It seems like readers all over this site have been hit by a lazy bug or somethin'. Anyway...

    I was happy that Lindsey finally saw Spike's tears. I know that he already thought that vampires had feelings, but that just proved it. I also like the fact that he sees Spike as more then just a sex toy (find it kind of cute that he's actually falling in love with him).

    I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From K.Blood on July 17, 2008
    All those chips and circuits in Spike need to fry, then Spike needs to kick Lindsey's father's ass.

    Those are just my personal thoughts. Nice work. Please continue. :)
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  • From K.Blood on July 09, 2008
    Interesting. I'm waiting to see where you take this story.

    One thing that I found a little unnerving was when Lindsey's father was asking if he could use what is essentially (though I don't really like thinking of Spike in such a manner) his son's sex toy. Weird.

    Anyway, good start. You don't see much of the Lindsey/Spike thing so I hope that you do continue with this (plus I REALLY want to see what you've got planned for this fic).
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