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Reviews for The Birthday Present

By : SpikesEvilbint
  • From K.Blood on December 12, 2008
    Chap31:
    I love what Spike did to Warren. I was expecting another torture scene but you surprised me. I think it's fitting that Warren's going to be in the program. (and I figured that was the person behind the door)

    I can't wait to see how the reunion with Lindsey is going to turn out. Is Spike going to get violent? Or is he going to turn into a needy puddle of pudding? And how long are you going to keep this poor reader guessing? :)

    Chap32:
    I think it's sweet that Spike wanted to save Angel from the Initiative.

    *Spike grinned and threw his arms open wide. ?I?m a daddy!?*

    That made me laugh. The whole scene just seemed so...Spike. You really do a great job of writing his character.

    Chap33:
    Angel is really pissing me off. I don't have a specific reason why, it's a lot of things all at once...

    It's him being too over dominant with Spike. It's because of Spike's emotional state when they are together. And especially how Angel's actions keep reminding me of Lindsey and how he had treated Spike. And that Angel seems to know that some of the things he's doing to Spike just isn't right, but he tries to tell himself otherwise.

    I just seriously want to punch Angel in the face right now.
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  • From K.Blood on November 23, 2008
    With the way in which you wrote the ending to chapter 30 leaves me to believe that that's not Lindsey behind that door...

    Sodomized with a bat, tortured, broken bones, dead, then having his corpes set on fire...
    It still seems to be not enough for that bastard. I hope he gets reincarnated as a snail and someone steps on him (not that I condone violence against animals, but I will in this case). Anyway, thanks for this long awaited revenge chapter. ^_^ And thanks for creating a story that could get me to hate someone so much (a sign of great character writing).

    Can't wait to see where the plot goes from here.
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  • From Alwaysand on November 22, 2008
    All right Spike! Big Bad gets revenge! Weird thing is I could have sworn Lindsey was staying with Oz. Would braces work on a vampire if they can stay in gameface long enough? Please put Angel and Spike together. Pretty please? With sugar on top. I bet together they could figure out aay to destroy the Initiative
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  • From K.Blood on November 18, 2008
    Nope, I'm still around. Sorry I haven't commented in a while I've just been busy.

    I have to agree with Alwaysand. As soon as the bottle broke I was expecting Spike to get a wicked grin on his face and head over there to retrieve a shard. However...

    "Always did like baseball."

    I think I enjoy this idea even more. :D

    I liked it that for a moment McDonald wondered 'How did he stand it?'
    It's just nice that the bastard had such a thought about what he was going through and compared it to what those who he'd forced to do the same must have gone through.
    Getting a taste of his own medicine and now understanding just how horrible it really is, I like that. Keep it up. :)
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  • From Alwaysand on November 15, 2008
    And here I was expecting he'd use the end of the broken bottle. Still don't like Buffy. MacDonald is getting what he deserves and I'm still waiting to see who the pairing in this is.
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  • From K.Blood on November 12, 2008
    Nice to see that Spike is acting more like his old self, though with everything that's happened to him it is understandable if he never completely reverts back to the person who he once was.

    The sex scene betweem Spike and Angel was handled well. I hate that Angel did that, but at the same time I can't fully blame him for his actions because he has his own problems/mental scars from the Initiative.

    I really hope that it's finally time for Spike to get his revenge, and that along the way the Initiative is taken down as well.

    Also, I like that he didn't hurt Buffy more then he needed to.


    Spike & Lindsey, Spike & Oz, Spike & Angel...I honestly don't care anymore. I don't mean that in a negative way. Since I first started reading this I've been trying to figure out who Spike is going to end up with, but this story is just so well done and entertaining that I really don't care about the m/m aspect of the story anymore. Heck, you could even end it as a spuffy m/f fic, if you wanted, or not have Spike end up with anyone at all.

    It's just that you've done such a great job with his character and all that he's gone through. Now all I want to do is read on and see if Spike can make it out all right (and if he can do that while finding someone to love him, then good for him).

    If I want to read a good story I usually surf the Originals section of the site. If I'm looking for a simple m/m fix then I head over here to the purely fanfiction parts, but your story surprised me. At first I thought that this was just the usual m/m fanfic, however I was wrong. It's become more then a random m/m sexual pairing with a dash of plot thrown in like somekind of after thought. This has become a really good character driven fic where the only thing going for it isn't simply the m/m relationship like with most other m/m stories.

    Thank you for writing it, and I can't wait to find out what else is in store for Spike. I hope the girls find him before the Initiative does.
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  • From Alwaysand on November 08, 2008
    I liked the whole thing. Spike was at least himself and Buffy so self centered that she of course put her wants before his needs. I hope he makes it. A shame there isn't anyone to truly care for him.
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  • From Alwaysand on November 07, 2008
    I actually liked it. Waaay too short of course.
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  • From Alwaysand on November 01, 2008
    Spike and Buffy?! For this fic can I just say ick! I don't mind the pairing but for this story it is icky. And Spike turns into bad guy is no fun either. Revenge is one thing, gratuitous pointless violence another.
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  • From Alwaysand on October 25, 2008
    Oh come on! Does Spike ever get a break in this thing?! Now you have him afraid of the one person who both cares about him and understands what happened to him.
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  • From Alwaysand on October 23, 2008
    Wow! talk about Powerful. I wonder how much help Sire's blood would be for Spike and I kinda hope that whatever is between Spike and Angel lasts past the healing process
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  • From Alwaysand on October 18, 2008
    You do this just to hear us all weep. That poor Spike is reduced to thinking of his Sire as an owner. Dumb me. I don't know why I thought seeing his Sire would wake Spike up. Too much to expect but oh how I wanted it. sniffle sniffle. Waaahh! Fix my vampires!
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  • From Alwaysand on October 02, 2008
    Man! Does Spike ever get a break?! Even being rescued he's being attacked. I can't wait till that chip is reprogrammed. I hate the poor thing having to pine over Lindsey. I once read a story where hell was described as a place where every evil deed committed is suffered by the perpetrator. I'd like Lindsey and his dad to go there.
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  • From Alwaysand on September 27, 2008
    Oh come on! As depraved as Lindsey is and he's surprised his dad is too? I hope Angel comes soon. I hope eventually Spike and Angel take this battle right into the teeth of the enemy.
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  • From Alwaysand on September 12, 2008
    Hooray! Okay get him well enough and send him to Angel! (demanding little fan aren't I? Sorry.) PLEASE let us see more interaction between Spike and Angel. I think the Sire/Childe bond could save Spike.
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