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Reviews for The Birthday Present

By : SpikesEvilbint
  • From Alwaysand on September 08, 2008
    Good to know Angel made it out and Xander is a good guy. Still waiting to find out about Giles. I hope Spike will heal enough to feed soon as I understand it speeds up the healing process. Its a shame Angel doesn't know about Spike. Maybe having his GrandSire could help bring him back to himself.
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  • From K.Blood on September 02, 2008
    I hope that things are going to start to get better for Spike from now on. I really *really* want to believe that they will.
    But there's this mean voice in the back of my head that tells me bad things are still to come. Please prove that little voice wrong. Please... Can Spike get better now? There are so many people who he still needs to beat up.

    Anyway, I am but only a loyal reader.
    Take the story wherever you wish and I shall read on. But still...

    Spike-happy-revenge-fun-time now? Please.

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  • From Alwaysand on September 02, 2008
    Sniffle. Poor Spike. Conditioned to think any man who helps him must be his boyfriend? I'm glad Willow and Buffy know what to do. Is this going to have a romance aspect to it? And if so what pairing? I hope Spike can grow his fangs back.
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  • From Alwaysand on August 27, 2008
    Yay! Storytime. Now there are real people with real things happening. I hope Oz is smart enough not to go home. If Buffy helps vampires is it cause she had to rescue Angel? Is Giles on her side or the initiatives? Please tell me Xander is good people too. If Willow helps Oz and Vamps does she do the underground railway bit for other Demons too? Any chance Spike can be fixed? more story please!
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  • From Alwaysand on August 18, 2008
    Can Spike be brought out of it without the remote control? If he has any kind of locator device I would imagine that Oz is in serious trouble for harboring a vampire. The only thing in his favor is he doesn't know Spike is a vampire. Is Oz wolfy in this fic? Cause if he is I imagine he'd need to hide that from the nuts in white. Please don't let them find Spike. I'm really getting tired of the constant torturing of Spike bit.
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  • From Alwaysand on August 12, 2008
    Free Spike! Free Spike! Free Spike! Free Spike! I hope Lindsey and his dad go back to Hell where they obviously came from and ROT there!
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  • From Alwaysand on August 09, 2008
    Yay for Oz! I hope Spike remembers the invitation for safety when the time comes. Does it count as an invitation to enter if Oz isn't home?
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  • From Ryoko21 on August 07, 2008
    Ahhh! Come on already! I really like this story, but I need to see some sweet vengeance! Or something! Damn cliffies!
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  • From Alwaysand on August 04, 2008
    Still really hating Lindsey. Shame Oz is straight. I'm a happily ever after girl and I don't see anything good about this relationship. Even Angelus/Spike stories have some redeeming qualities. Where are Lindsey's?
    If this is just a sick f**k story let me know. I don't have anything against them for other people but I'd rather read something else. If Lindsey's going to turn into a person let me know that too. I can be patient for a good reason
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  • From Ryoko21 on August 03, 2008
    I'm trying not to, but I really don't like Lindsey in this fic. I kind of want to see him dead. His dad, too, but him as well. Or, at least let Spike drug and rape him without caring. Something to even up this situation.
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  • From Alwaysand on August 03, 2008
    Any hope for Oz saving Spike? I still feel like there isn't any real feeling on Lindsey's side of the equation. Maybe without the drugs and free there isn't anything more than Stockholm Syndrome on Spike's side of things either. Please Oz be one of the good guys and save Spike.
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  • From K.Blood on August 02, 2008
    I have to agree with Ryoko21's comments above.

    I like the Lindsey/Spike thing--so don't get me wrong--but from the beginning their relationship felt strange and as this story has progressed I'm disliking Lindsey all the more for how he's treating Spike(who he's supposed to "love").

    I've actually found myself liking the interactions between Oz and Spike more and more. I don't know what you have planned for the rest of this fic, but if it has anything to do with some Oz/Spike stuff, then you have my full support. (Though, if you keep it a Lindsey/Spike pairing then know that I will still enjoy it just as much--as long as Lindey realizes that he's been a jerk)
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  • From Ryoko21 on August 01, 2008
    I wanna see Spike rip something to shreds. He's fun as the William-esque poofter that hangs all over Lindsey, but I want to see the British punk rock vampire get some bloody vengeance.
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  • From Alwaysand on July 30, 2008
    Wow! Not sure which way to jump on this story. On the one hand I feel so bad for Spike on the other hand Lindsey's so screwed over by his upbringing he doesn't even get that what he's doing is wrong and OMG is his dad the creepiest pervert or what?!
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  • From Ryoko21 on July 29, 2008
    I just managed to find this story, and I was a little uncertain because I'm not big on Spike/Lindsey, but I really like the plot you have going. The idea of the chips being used to completely control the vampires is really interesting. I just have to wonder if Spike will ever have the chip and the drugs broken or removed. He's not really Spike right now, and I really liked the way you portrayed him in the beginning, as the caged Big Bad. I'd like to see how Lindsey would do with the real Spike, the rough-speaking trouble-maker, and see if Lindsey's love can last when Spike isn't a drugged-up sex doll. I also wonder if you might ever bring in Angel or Drusilla. Maybe it would be good to show Lindsey some of Spike's history and vampiric background.

    Anyway, that's just my opinion. I like what you've done so far, and I can't wait to see what you do next.
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