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Reviews for What sound does a heart breaking make?

By : chilli
  • From ANON - DittoSpikette on March 21, 2004
    Totally excellent. Angsty and put us in a bad mood (initially). :) Daf & Dxxoo
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  • From ANON - blu sanada on March 09, 2004
    Where ever you are getting your ideas for this story keep em coming. Chapter 10 has to be my favorite chapter yet. From how horrible Xander's parents are to how they laid that trap out for Giles and Buffy. I fill sad for Willow but she bought it on herself. I mean Xander's been her friend longer then Buffy and she just drop him for her. I loved every part to this chapter. You definitely made my day. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - blu sanada on February 29, 2004
    I read the other chapters, but I wanted to comment on all of them together. This is a great story. But this last chapter got me teary eyed. Okay so it wasn't just this chapter, but it was the best. I did catch on to what was happening with Faith, but you took it in a direction I didn't think about. I figure that after the battle Buffy would lose her slayer powers, but I didn't think that Faith was coming back. Did I miss something? They were fighting the demons and next thing there in the library. Did they defeat the demons or what?
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  • From ANON - gact on February 17, 2004
    At the beginning I thought this was going to be a purely slash fic, but you actually created this excellent story. Awesome, it's absolutely awesome, i can't wait to read more. Oh, and will Cordy become a vamp instead?
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  • From ANON - Tim on February 14, 2004
    Another GREAT story. Keep it up, I'm loving it:)
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  • From ANON - attirb on February 08, 2004
    Like all her other stories this one is fabulous!
    Again lemonychocolate shows that she is one of the greatest fanfic/slash writers out there.
    Her strength lies in the long, the deep digging stories where she crafts something complex and new
    and where she creats interessting character developments and well-thought-through AU and/or storylines.
    Thats also the case here.
    Read this Xancentric story to see the intelligent presented switch of the "normal" places
    where for example Scoobies are in truth evil and where there is more to vampires than we knew.
    Dear lemonychocolate please continue this and also your other works!
    Thanks!
    :-)

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  • From ANON - Meg on February 06, 2004
    I loved this fic. I would love to see Willow somehow return to Xan and the gang, but I am so excitec by this relationship you started with Angel and Xander. Will Wes possibly ever join in?
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  • From ANON - Angela on February 04, 2004
    Given that I usually hate stories that bash one or more characters, I always give them a chance to validate this treatment. Boy, am I glad I did! Am enjoying this story thoroughly and can't wait for how much more creativity you'll show when the New York contingent get their vengeance on the Sunnydale betrayers. Ethan & Cordy are a very good combination, I love it! Please tell me you'll have a scene or two of the 'Gruesome Twosome' tormenting the betrayers? About the only critique I have is that unless I'm wrong, Ethan usually called Giles either Rupert or Ripper, not Giles. Ethan wasn't around the gang long enough to pick up the kids' nickname for Giles. Please, keep writing, love the new characters you've created.
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  • From ANON - AK on February 03, 2004
    WOW!!! I love this story, I love having Giles and Buffy as mean and selfish. Of course not much of a stretch for Buffy, but wri writing and what a great turn having them go to be trained with the older vamps. It's wonderful and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Terri on February 03, 2004
    I think your doing a wonderful job with this story. I love how the vampires are training Xander, Cordy, and F. An. And I can't wait to see them go up against Giles, Oz, and Buffy. I haven't made up my mind yet about Willow. I don't feel bad about her being stuck with Buffy though, she chose them over Xander. Great writting. More please.
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  • From Chickalupe on February 03, 2004
    I don't know how to tell you this, but I think I love you (wow, I sound like a creepy stalker). You write some of the yummiest A/X fic out there and this story is no exception. Thank you for writing! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Michael on February 03, 2004
    Damn.
    I'm not really into the slash stuff, but this story is so strong. You can see the pain Xander goes through, and how it changes him. The end to part 2 is great, maybe they'll see what they're doing is wrong, or maybe just Willow. It's just unfortunate that the way you showed the school reacting is so true.
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  • From ANON - Terri on January 31, 2004
    Just wanted to say I like this story.I want Xander to be stronger than Buffy and Oz. I can't wait for some payback. Looking forward to seeing Buffy's reaction to Xander being bonded to Angel. That should make for a few laughs. All and all I think your doing a great job. Update soon.
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