Reviews for B's Butt BitchBy : MTL |
Addendum Chapter #1 Review:
I'm guessing based on this that Buffy would insist on sleeping with Faith and snuggling with her beaten opponent in the wager, whom she basically has obliged to accept their "marriage" from this acting up session- now that'd be creepy., but given how they acted up in this: it does tend to follow that way.
Chapter #1 Review.
Given this bet, I can see perhaps one or the other of them having made a deal with the vamps for their "entertainment" if it helps the victrix to win the match- but that'd be creepy: say here Faith happens to look sideways while Buffy's sodomizing her, and Buffy also, and they see vamps watching with a freaky "delighted" look on their faces, and realizes that this superheroine in the wager with her is, or appears to have, betrayed her and their calling.
It was a dumb bet between them that blew up way too far!
Glad to see that you finished B's Butt Bitch.
I will say that I am a bit disiponted. When Anya said she wanted revenge it made it sound like she was going to butt fuck Cordelia in return for losing her powers. Wanting to fuck Faith in this case does not make sense for Anya.
I do hope that you will make a future story that focuses upon Cordelia, Tara, or Fred as the submissive butt slut.
I loved this chapter, you really gang banged the right characters.
Chap10, sorry it's over I have really loved this one. Not the end chap I would have liked, I prefer 1 on 1 stuff and really wanted to see Faith get tattooed, but still sexy. Maybe in a sequel.
Looking forward to more stories. Happy New Year!
The End? Are you done with this story?
I had hoped for a few more pairings. Though to be fair, you did a really good job of introducing a lot of f/f anal. Very nice, love when Queen C and Harmony join fics. Was expecting Buffy to take advantage of one of the girls however, as they used Faith.
One of them finally going deep in anal's backdoor, only to find Buffy lining up her strap on them and fucking them while they fucked Faith. Oh well, maybe next time.
Or get Xander to have a go.
At any rate, 10/10.
Chap9, anal fisting was very hot. I really wanna see Buffy break Willow but I guess Cordelia will have to do
Good to see that Faith is completly broken and accepting of her new role in life.
Cordelia's apperance gives me hope that we will see a second butt slut enter the story. Ether Willow as Cordy's bitch due to her new anal facination or Cordelia as Willow Willing Wench after being broken for spying on them.
Very nice. WIllow finally gets a turn. And floating around the idea of the OG scoobies making her air tight, or even running a train on her? All good things.
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing how Willow will join them.
Chap7, amazing. I read it slowly to savor it. Looking forward to more. I would prefer Willow ends up as Buffy's second bitch rather then another top. I guess I'll see. Great writing.
Glad to see an update. And yes, adding Willow to the mix is very nice. Her comments seemed to make it even dirtier. And of course, Willow would be a switch, wanting Buffy to top her but at the same time wanting to butt fuck Faith.
Can't wait to read more. Always a pleasure.
In need of an update. Any chance Buffy will invite Willow to play along? Or Xander? Get a chance at Faith's backend?
You know, if theres one girl on this that would love to dom someone its Cordy. CC is the only actress that might actually win in a wrestling match with the rest. But I never seem to see her in these kind of fics.
Its a shame.
I really enjoyed chap6, very hot. Looking forward to next part. Hopeing Faith gets her butt-hole tattooed. And maybe a nice tongue-stud.
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