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Reviews for Gehanna

By : MTLandLL
  • From Oric13 on January 13, 2011
    Oh, and I agree with IMTCWAY about keeping Buffy & Dawn's close sister relationship intact.
    I can see that in public Buffy would need to treat Dawn as her bitch, but there's no good reason why she couldn't be sweet to Dawn in private (while fucking her cute kid sister's fuckholes :).
    A bit of sisterly tenderness between those two when they're alone or with Willow & Faith would make the kinky sex they're having even better IMO.
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  • From KJakkano82 on January 11, 2011
    I like this story. First it seems that you may be developing something of a plot to it given what you have shown of Lilah and how the Buffy and Dawn situation is going; most of that however still waits to be seen.

    Now, you are obviously showing a kind of mind control magic in place inside the prison as demonstrated by how Buffy is having lesbian feelings and increased sex drive. Tied to that are low key physical changes in the form of increased sensitivity of the prisoners' anuses and the presents of a dedicated anal g-spot, like granting the female inmates an equivalent to the prostate while leaving regular erogenous zones in place. All of which by itself would have quite an effect. However there is something else that to me appears to be happening but has not been explicitly stated. That is the way the act of anal sex is affecting the minds of the participants with regard to their status as a Submissive or Dominant, Top or Bottom.

    It looks to me like you have the act of taking someone in the ass is causing, not instantly but at a progressive rate, the person doing so to have their feelings of dominance and power to be amplified so that even if not normal sexually aggressive and willing to use others they become so, as an example Buffy. At the same time it causes the act of receiving anal sex to be absolutely revolting to them such that they would never want to try it, perhaps even desensitizing a tops anal G-spot so that they don't become stimulated through other sex acts.

    On the flip side, you have the act of being taken in the ass by someone, though it looks like at a much faster rate and with more intensity, seems to be causing the person being butt-fucked to have feelings of submissiveness. Even in a person who is normally a strong and sexually dominant individual, Faith for example, to enjoy it and become willingly submissive. In reverse of how Tops are made to perceive it, for subs the act of receiving anal sex becomes the most enjoyably form of sex they can have and makes them see offering up there ass as the most perfect way of demonstrating their submission.

    My question is am I right in reading Gehanna/Amy's magic as having such an effect, or am I reading more into the behavior of the characters than is actually present?

    With that out of the way I had a couple of ideas. First you have said that a incantation is needed to open the portal for someone to leave. So I was thinking, what if after someone has been processed as a prisoner the portal is tied do the status of the one reading the incantation/passing through the portal so that only whose mind is completely submissive can traverse it? As such no prisoner with a dominant personality and thus still a threat to Amy could leave, only submissive.

    The other idea I had was what if Buffy, Willow, and Dawn escape and defeat Amy, restoring reality to the way it should be, and in the process Willow were to become the master of the Gehanna prison in Amy's place. Since this looks like it is set in an early Season 7 time frame it might be fun to have it so that The First Evil and its minions have no power in Gehanna's realm and so Buffy and Willow decide to use the prison as a safe haven and training ground for all of the Potential Slayers. I think a lot of fun could be had with that.

    I am Still looking forward to seeing what happens now that Dawn is Buffy's bitch. For example how is Lilah going to react.
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  • From Oric13 on January 11, 2011
    Another good chapter! I especially liked the part where Buffy made Dawnie display her thoroughly fucked, gaping asshole in the mess hall and Willow playing kinky mind games with Faith.
    Willow and Buffy are turning out to be a couple of very talented tops :)
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  • From ANON - david hart on January 11, 2011
    love it please update soon
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  • From topcat098 on December 30, 2010
    I like the story but I'm disappointed that Buffy is not going to treat Dawnie as her sister any more, even in private. I think the relationship between them is too important to lose.
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  • From Nooneimportant on December 20, 2010
    Well I suspect that after a few more days enjoying the benefits of being tops, Buffy and Willow will be somewhat reluctant to leave.
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  • From ANON - david hart on December 18, 2010
    love it please update soon
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  • From Oric13 on December 16, 2010
    I'm enjoying this series a whole lot, and are curious to see how the Buffy/Dawn relationship will progress in the next chapter(s).
    Will Buffy finally give in and make cute lil Dawnie her bitch?
    And if she does, will Buffy eventually share her sister-bitch with Willow, just like Willow shared her bitch with her...

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - justagrump on December 06, 2010
    I registered just so I could post reviews on this story :-) I gotta say, I love it! Buffy as the reluctant Top is priceless. Faith as a closet Bitch? Excellent! Have to wonder about Buffy's POV during her first time and what she thought she watched Faith get aroused and orgasm from it. While I could do with a little less "gaping ass" I'm quite enjoying this ride. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - david hart on December 05, 2010
    love it please update soon
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  • From ANON - sliverx on November 30, 2010
    sorry if i sound annoying but i've been waiting for the next chapter for so long i'm going insane please please please could you update soon
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  • From ANON - No one on November 10, 2010
    It looks like Buffy will be 'disciplining' Dawn pretty soon and can't wait to see how that goes.

    However, I do have a tiny request: Could you put a footnote about new characters at the bottom of a part when you introduce them? I never watched Desperate Housewives so I had to do a wiki search to figure out who these people were.
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  • From ANON - david hart on November 08, 2010
    love it please update soon
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  • From Oric13 on October 16, 2010
    I really like the way this story is going.
    Some good development with the Willow/Faith storyline, and I also very much enjoyed that new storyline with the two sluts wanting to become Elle's bitch.
    Nice little reveal with Anya as the resident shopkeeper in Gehanna.
    I'm curious to find out where the Buffy/Dawn storyline is heading (probably with Buffy deflowering Dawn, I'm guessing ;).

    Another excellent chapter!
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  • From ANON - david hart on October 16, 2010
    love it please update soon
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