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Reviews for The Baby Sitter

By : Audrina56
  • From ANON - WickedTongue on September 29, 2006
    awww! how sad. Spike came off a little mean and cold. Poor Buffy. But the sex was good.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on September 08, 2005
    Oh God.. How could he do that?! No doubt Buffy was kinda like a bitch in canon, but you can justify the ending like this! Sequel or more chapters, please!
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  • From ANON - spuffylover on July 26, 2005
    the beginnig was good but at the end, spike was awful!!!it was kinda sad(and sorry if i've alredy reviewed you, cuz i think i remember this story
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  • From ANON - spuffylover on July 18, 2005
    will you do a sequel? he treated her like a whore!!!!!!loved the story till he started to be a jerk, so do sequel, make it right!!
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  • From ANON - lolita on May 07, 2004
    Hey you said you'd make it better - please do, I'm all sad now, and yeah Spike was a creep in this - but Buffy was a little Harmony-ish in my opinion, she seemed a little slutty and a little dumb, I would like to see how you carry this on.
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  • From ANON - caroline eager on April 11, 2004
    i don't know if that's all ur going to write, but i would love to read another chapter or a sequal to it...thank u!!!
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  • From ANON - glamis on April 06, 2004
    O.M.G!!! when i first read your notes i thought this was gonna be Buffy/ Conner!!! I was like" He's only a baby you sick woman!!!
    I was releved when i read ahead and realised it was a Spuffy ( which looking back was blindingly obviouse as i was in the Spuffy section) Ah i'm well even stupider then Xander.... and proud!
    Anyway moving swiftly onwards... i loved it! even if Spike was a creep, and i dont know why i was suprised he was, because he's hardly like Saint Spike in the actual show. I reaiil like how you have Dru as the loving wife and mother..that was funny...
    My favourite line:
    " Mr Giles is my fathers name"
    And what a poor decrepit old old man he must be...POOR GILES! I had visual images of him sitting at home in London sipping his tea, cleaning his glasses and thinking about his disapontment of a son.
    And you're right, 16 is the age of consent in merry ol England, so if you get arrested, or kicked out of the country for writing Buffy as underage there, you can always come and live with me!... But only if your, really, really desperate.
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  • From ANON - sluggie on April 06, 2004
    I second October's statement. I've read this everywhere iteen een posted before and I get such a naughty thrill from reading it again...hehe...would love to see this made into a full length story...nice job.
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  • From ANON - October/SlayersGift on April 06, 2004
    OMG! I've read this everywhere, and Im still waiting for chapter two! I love this... are you going to finish it? Pweeeeeeeeze! Please? Do I have to beg?
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  • From ANON - Tigger on January 23, 2004
    I really liked it but one question, are you going to add on or leave me hangin'? Please hurry I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - anciirl5irl on January 21, 2004
    Well shit that wasn't nif Spf Spike at all. What an asshole! Maybe you could write another chapter showing he's not such a jerk.
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  • From ANON - Validatedhatred on January 21, 2004
    good editing job. you kept the same idea but made it a little more clear what was going on. cant wait for more if you decide to write it!
    --ValidatedHatred
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  • From ANON - oct on January 21, 2004
    Hmm...

    Kinda put off from it at first, but now I want to see where you take this.
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  • From ANON - white rabbit on January 20, 2004
    this was a really good short story, i'm sure you could expand it into a great fiction...teen buffy allowing herself to be used by the much older spike...and spike been drawn to the tragic lonely teen...he's rich, she's poor...he's on the verge of divorce and she's on the verge of growing up...come on! there's loads there to work with...you can do it...you know you can...write more...you know you want to.
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  • From ANON - Sarah Aless on January 19, 2004
    Yup more please. Spike was kinda sleazy at the end but I'll read it whether he stays that way or not cos this story has potential.
    And yeah another validation on the age of consent thing, it is 16 here in Britain - is it 18 over there? or does it differ from state to state?
    Sarah
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