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Reviews for The Baby Sitter

By : Audrina56
  • From ANON - ValidatedHatred on January 19, 2004
    i think this was a really good story, but some of it was unclear (the end, mainly). it was good, but unclear. i think if you wanna clear stuff up and expand on it to make a longer fic that would be really cool. i'd defenitely read it, even if the spuffy ship is starting to get repetitive, i think you can make this really cool.
    --ValidatedHatred
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  • From ANON - Rhonda on January 19, 2004
    I was jusnna nna tell you I wanted to read more, and suggest you turn it into a full fic. Then I read your question about it. Yeah, go for it. Yes, Spike's being a bit of a jerk (kinda like with Harmony). Buffy is just the innocent young girl she was in the beginning of the show. Either way, I'd be interested to find out where you took these two in an ongoing fling.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2004
    make it a fic

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  • From ANON - Lauren on January 19, 2004
    I think it would be an interesting fic. I'm kinda mad at spike for being a jerk but maybe he was just confused by his feelings for her.....hehe...I'm trying to rationalize for him. Anyway, it didn't suck. I like the idea very much!
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  • From ANON - LadyLiz on January 18, 2004
    MAKE IT A FICT PLEASE!!!!!!!!! It'd be so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Debbie on January 18, 2004
    The story is dark, but good. It'd be interesting to see how their relationship changes. Keep writing! Thanks =)
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  • From patty on January 18, 2004
    It doesn't suck at all. I DO think, though, that you should look
    into having a beta read it over first if you intend to continue. Some-
    times spelling and punctuation errors can detract from a story. But
    don't stop writing, no matter what.
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