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Disciplining Dawn	By : MTL Category: -Buffy the Vampire Slayer > FemmeSlash - Female/Female > Buffy/Dawn Views: 87001 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 3
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Slipping into the girls bathroom Dawn checked under each and every bathroom stall to make sure she was alone. With not a pair of legs to be seen Dawn quickly slipped into one of the bathroom stalls, locked the door, sat down on the seat and pulled from her bag the little item she had been thinking about all day.
The little brunette studied the precious thing for a few moments, reading the words inscribed on it again and again as if trying to burn it into her memory forever before wrapping it around her neck.
Dawn took a deep satisfying sigh as if she was finally able to breathe again.
And to Dawn that's exactly what it felt like.
Why?
Because her collar was back where it belonged, wrapped around her neck.
Dawn ran her fingers over the little tag on the collar and smiled widely, the four little words imprinted on the tag which described her so completely repeating over and over in her mind.
Property of Buffy Summers.
That was what she was. That was what she always would be, even without the collar her sister and owner had given her, but Dawn loved her collar because it reinforced what she truly was, it said what was in her heart.
Even though Buffy had ordered Dawn to leave her collar at home the littlest Summers hadn't been able to resist slipping it into her bag and taking it to school with her. All through her classes she had thought about it, even daring to peek into her bag when no one was watching so she could read the little tag again, and again, and again until she was able to force herself to re-concentrate on her schoolwork.
Dawn wished she could wear her collar all the time, but Buffy was right, she couldn't where it in public with out people becoming suspicious of the Summers sisters relationship, and the last thing Dawn wanted to do was to lose Buffy simply because she couldn't go two seconds without wanting to feel her collar around her neck.
The brunette jumped when she was awoken suddenly from her thoughts by a loud ringing sound. Dawn had been so sure that she had been alone, but it was pretty clear that somebody's phone was going off somewhere in the bathroom.
Looking around for the source of the call Dawn realise that it was coming from her bag. Opening it in reaching inside Dawn found a mobile phone which she had never seen before.
Dawn didn't own a mobile phone because Buffy had told her they couldn't afford it right now, but her big sister had obviously changed her mind.
"Hello." Dawn said into the phone.
"Hello slave." Buffy said from her end of the line.
"Hello mistress." Dawn said softly and yet happily.
"So, I'm in your room and I'm looking for your collar but I can't find it anywhere." Buffy said, "Any idea where you left it Dawnie?"
Dawn bit her lip. She didn't want to lie to her mistress but she was afraid what would happen if she told Buffy the truth.
"I... I don't know mistress." Dawn said.
"I think that might have been a little more believable if you hadn't paused." Buffy said, "Now I'm going to ask you again, and this time I really, really want you to think before you answer. Do you have any idea where your collar is Dawn?"
There was a pause.
"Yes mistress." Dawn said, even more quietly than before.
"Where is it then?" Buffy asked.
"I... I... I took it to school with me." Dawn admitted. Hearing her mistress sigh down the phone Dawn quickly said, "But I've been really careful, I haven't worn it when people were looking, I swear, I just... wanted it near me... you know?"
"Are you wearing it now?" Buffy asked.
There was another pause.
"Yes."
Another sigh.
"But I'm in the bathroom alone, which is the only place I've been wearing it, and I'm locked in one of the stalls so it's not like anyone can see me." Dawn blurted out.
"That's not the point Dawn." Buffy said angrily, "The point is you're in a public place, carrying around something which could destroy our relationship and give someone a excuse to take you away from me, and what's worse you've disobeyed me. I gave you an order and you disobeyed me. How am I supposed to protect you if you keep disobeying me? For God's sakes Dawn I thought making you my slave would crush this cliched teenage rebellion of yours. Obviously I was wrong. Perhaps we should forget this and try something else."
"No, no, no, no, no, please mistress, I'm sorry, I swear I'll never do it again just please, please give me another chance." Dawn begged as she began to weep.
Hearing her little sister beginning to cry down the phone melted Buffy's anger and the blonde immediately began to regret her words.
"I'm sorry Dawn." Buffy said, "I shouldn't expect you to adjust to this thing between us overnight. But I will not stand for disobedience and for this you will be punished, do you understand me?"
"Yes, thank you mistress." Dawn said.
"Good, now stand up." Buffy said.
"Mistress?" Dawn said in confusion.
"I said stand up slut!" Buffy growled, in a tone which had Dawn quickly obeying her, "Well, are you standing?"
"Yes mistress." Dawn said.
"Good girl," Buffy said, "Now, take off your pants."
Dawn was about to object again but quickly stopped herself and did as she was told.
"Are they off?" Buffy asked.
"Yes mistress." Dawn said.
"Good, now take off your panties." Buffy said.
This time Dawn obeyed without even thinking about hesitating, her panties joining her pants around her ankles.
"Ok, they're off." Dawn said.
"Alright, now lean against the wall," Buffy said, before another thought came to her, "Wait, first take off your collar."
"No, please mistress no." Dawn pleaded.
"Take. Your. Collar. Off." Buffy said in a tone which would have made the baddest of daemons think twice before disobeying her.
Quietly whimpering Dawn reluctantly removed her collar.
"Where... where do you want me to put it?" Dawn asked.
"In your bag, and be quick about it." Buffy said inpatiently, "Then lean against the wall."
Dawn slowly did as she was told.
"Ok, what now?" Dawn asked.
"Now, you're going to spank yourself." Buffy said.
"What?" Dawn exclaimed.
"You heard me." Buffy said, "Spank yourself, and count them so I know you're doing them."
"But... somebody might hear?" Dawn questioned.
"Then I suggest you be as quiet as possible." Buffy said.
Dawn sighed and resigned herself to her fate, "How many spanks should I give myself?"
"Mmmmm, let's see now..." Buffy said thoughtfully, "I'll punish you properly for your disobedience when you get home, but for now I think, 50 spanks for taking your collar to school, 50 for the unnecessary backtalk, and 50 for forgetting to call me mistress, yet again."
Buffy allowed a few moments for her words to sink in, half expecting Dawn to object but she didn't. In fact her little sister was horrified that she had forgotten to call her mistress by her proper title again and swore to herself she would start treating Buffy with the proper respect she deserved.
"Ok mistress," Dawn whimpered meekly, "Should I start now?"
"Yes, and remember to count each spank, but don't thank me for them, the last thing we need is for you to start yelling out thank you mistress Buffy over and over again in a public bathroom. A teacher might walk in or something. And if that happens I think we'd both much rather them think you were just a perverted little slut who spanks herself on her bathroom breaks than a perverted little slut who spanks herself on her bathroom breaks who is a sex slave for her own sister." Buffy said.
There was a moment of silence.
"Begin." Buffy commanded.
"Owww... one... owww... two... owww... three... owww... four... owww... five..."
Dawn found the whole situation so incredibly humiliating and degrading, and she absolutely loved it.
Here she was, in the girls bathroom at her school, half naked, spanking herself and counting each spank for the pleasure of her mistress, her own sister, Buffy Summers who just happened to be listening to the entire thing on her brand new mobile phone.
She could be discovered at any minute by one of her fellow students and Buffy could just hang up, leaving her to become known as that weird girl who spanks herself in public places or something. And she could also be discovered by one of the teachers and this could even go on her permanent record. How humiliating would that be? Oh her pussy was dripping wet just thinking about it, or that could have been from the spanking, Dawn couldn't tell. God she was turning into such a little pervert, a sick twisted little pain slut who needed to be put in her place by her mistress.
"Owww... ninety eight... owww... ninety nine... owww... one hundred... owww... one hundred and one... owww... one hundred and two."
Buffy was getting such a rush over the level of control she now possessed over her little sister. Killing daemons didn't even make her feel half this powerful.
At this very moment Buffy had her sweet little Dawnie, her own baby sister, practically naked in a public bathroom spanking herself because she had told her to do so.
It was Dawn's fault of course, if she hadn't been so disobedient and taken her collar without permission Buffy wouldn't have to have rang her and Dawn wouldn't be having to suffer this humiliation. Honestly, why did Dawn have to be such a greedy little brat? It was just lucky that there sisterly relationship had advanced to this level otherwise Buffy just didn't see how on earth she could possibly give Dawn the disciplining she so obviously needed.
"Owww... one hundred and forty six... owww... one hundred and forty seven... owww... one hundred and forty eight... owww... one hundred and forty nine... owww... one hundred and fifty."
Once the spanking was over with there was a long pause. Dawn began to wonder if Buffy was still there but when she listened very carefully she could hear the sound of her sister's breathing.
"May I... may I please pull up my pants now mistress?" Dawn asked, finally breaking the silence.
There was another pause.
"Alright..." Buffy said.
At this Dawn reached down with one hand, pulled her pants up, and began to awkwardly try and re-do the buttons with one hand as she kept a hold of the phone with the other.
"But..." Buffy said.
"But what mistress?" Dawn asked.
"But I don't think we're done just yet... I think you need to be punished further." Buffy said, thinking for a moment, "I know, as punishment for disobeying me I want you to go to the boys bathroom and offer the first guy you see a blow job."
"What!" Dawn exclaimed.
"I said I want you to go to the boys bathroom and offer the first guy you see a blow job." Buffy repeated.
"But... but... but... but mistress I thought you said we had to be, you know, careful and not draw attention to ourselves?" Dawn questioned.
"That's right Dawnie, we need to be careful not to draw attention to our relationship, however we shouldn't need to worry about drawing attention to you. After all, if people think of you as the school slut it will distract their attention from what's really going on between us. Yes, I quite like that idea. My sister, the school slut. And best of all, while you're being a total slut during school hours you can be spending all your free time at home with me, studying and being disciplined, so you can be the first school slut ever to get good grades.
"The school slut." Dawn echoed, the very idea of it practically making her cream her panties.
"Oh don't worry Dawnie, chances are when you offer to suck some guys cock he'll be so surprised that some random girl is offering him head he'll probably think you're in on a practical joke to get him and turn you down." Buffy explained.
"But... but mistress, what if the guy goes for it?" Dawn asked.
"Then you suck his cock." Buffy said simply, like it was no big deal.
There was a silence and Buffy wondered why her little slave was taking so long to answer her. And then a thought popped into her head.
"Your not a lesbian are you Dawnie?" Buffy asked, before suddenly realising how that sounded, "I mean if you are that's ok, God knows you eat great pussy so..."
"I'm not a lesbian." Dawn interrupted, "At least I don't think I am."
"Well, this is the perfect opportunity to find out, don't you think?" Buffy pointed out.
Out of excuses not to do it Dawn resigned herself to doing as her mistress asked, and immediately felt herself becoming aroused from this perverted idea. She was about to offer a complete stranger oral sex. It made Dawn feel like such a slut, and it turned her on.
"Ok mistress." Dawn said, "Erm... what do I say exactly?"
"Hi, can I suck your cock, or something to that extent." Buffy said, sighing at having to spell it out.
"Ok mistress." Dawn said in defeat, "Should I call you back when it's done?"
Buffy thought for a minute and then said, "No, leave the phone on and put it in your pocket. I want to hear my little slave sucking cock for her mistress's amusement."
"Ok mistress." Dawn said.
"And no playing with yourself while sucking him off, I want your full concentration on pleasing him," Buffy ordered, "Do you understand?"
"Yes mistress." Dawn said,.
"Good girl." Buffy said.
There was a pause.
"Well go then." Buffy said impatiently.
"Yes mistress." Dawn said, before she placed her new phone in her pocket, getting up and leaving the bathroom stall and then the bathroom itself.
Dawn's mind raced as she walked to the boys bathroom.
Could she really do this? Could she really asked the first guy she saw if she could suck his cock?
It could be anyone, and there was a chance he would reject her and tell everyone and Dawn would become known as the school slut, and everyone would end up calling her such horrible names, and although these reasons should have convinced Dawn not to do it the truth was it had the exact opposite effect.
To her amazement Dawn found herself actually wanting to be rejected, not because she didn't want to suck cock, but because she actually wanted to be humiliated and degraded. The very thought of it practically had Dawn creaming her panties. God, she had become such a little pervert. Thank God she had a caring mistress that could help punish her for her perverted desires.
Coming to the door of the boys bathroom Dawn stood outside for a few moments, her mind going through all the different guys in her school which could be inside already, considering how much each one would be probably open to the idea and which ones might laugh at her and tell her she was a whore before running off to tell the whole school that little Dawn Summers was nothing more than a little cock crazy slut who should be mocked and ridiculed. Worse, what if there was more than one guy in there already? Would she just suck one guy off while others sat around and laughed at her? Or would she have to offer them all blow jobs? Would there be a line of guys waiting for their turn with her mouth? Or would they surround her, force her to try and suck and jack them off all at the same time? What if they wanted more than just a blow job? Was Dawn about to walk into her own private little gang bang? Oh God all these thoughts were driving her crazy with lust, she just had to get this over with, get inside the bathroom and see what was going to happen.
Finally summoning up the courage Dawn opened the door and stepped inside.
The bathroom was almost completely empty except for one guy who was washing his hands.
Dawn almost went as white as a ghost when she saw who was standing there.
Knowing for a long time she was bisexual Dawn had fantasized about a lot of people with in her school, both male and female, but standing before her was the one person she desired more than anyone else... well more than anyone else in her school... well definitely the guy she wanted more than any other guy in her school.
RJ Brooks was two years older than Dawn, strong, athletic, and very, very hot. He was one of the popular kids in Dawn's school and had even dated the head cheerleader for like a year before they broke up. He was so completely and utterly out of Dawn's league that despite having a crush on him for as long as she'd known him she'd never even said a word to him.
Turning his head to see who had come in RJ frowned at Dawn.
"Hey." RJ said in confusion.
There was a pause as Dawn fought with the huge lump in her throat which had suddenly appeared there. For a few horrible moments Dawn felt as if she couldn't talk, and then finally she said something.
"Hey." Dawn said weakly.
There was a moment of silence.
"What are you doing in here?" RJ asked.
Dawn bit her lip, terrified and yet enthralled of what was about to happen and although at first she struggled to say what she had been told to say all Dawn had to do was think of her mistress, think how she had displeased her already today and how displeasing her a second time would cause Dawn more pain than any whipping Buffy could dish out, and considering her sister was a slayer that was a lot.
"I... I was wondering..." Dawn stuttered, before taking a deep breath and saying what she came here to say, "Would you like a blow job?"
RJ blinked a few times in shock. He couldn't believe he'd heard what he'd just heard, it sounded like a line out of a bad porno movie or something, not real life.
"What?" He said.
"Would you like a blow job?" Dawn repeated somewhat more confidently.
RJ couldn't believe it, this girl was serious. Or was she. RJ's friends had played a few pranks on him in his time, but certainly nothing like this. But still he was suspicious. What if this was a setup, like she told him to close his eyes and when he opened them it was some ugly girl giving him head while his friends took pictures and laughed... or worse a guy or something.
"From you?" RJ asked suspiciously.
"Yes." Dawn said meekly, her previous confidence gone as rejection began to seem more likely.
RJ thought about the offer. There was a very good chance it was a setup to make him look like an idiot... but wasn't it worth the risk for the chance to get head? RJ had never had a girl suck his cock before, but had always wanted to know what it was like. He had begged his last girlfriend for months just to try it and he had gotten nowhere. They had broken up almost a month ago and he was feeling very sexually frustrated. He didn't recognise this girl but she was hot, and what kind of straight and sexually frustrated teenage male would turn down the opportunity to get head from a hot girl?
"Ok." RJ said.
"Ok." Dawn said.
"Ok." RJ said.
There was a moment of awkward silence.
"So... so where... are we going to... you know?" RJ said, still too shocked by this whole situation to say much.
"In there." Dawn said, pointing to one of the bathroom stalls.
"Ok." RJ said.
RJ walked into the bathroom stall, put the seat down and sat on the toilet, waiting for the brunette.
Dawn followed him after checking the other stalls to see if they were empty. It was a bit late for that considering if anyone had been in there they would have heard everything and probably wouldn't have left, however Dawn was lucky and no one was around. Or perhaps unlucky. Dawn found the thought of someone watching her suck off RJ actually aroused her and as her mind turned just one guy into a group of guys standing around her and taunting her as she bobbed up and down on RJ's dick her arousal only increased.
Closing and locking the toilet door behind her Dawn kneeled on the floor in front of RJ and reached for his pants.
Unzipping him Dawn slowly reached into his pants, took hold of his manhood, and after taking a deep breath, pulled it from its confines, Dawn coming face-to-face with her first real cock.
At first it wasn't much to look at, but that soon changed.
One of Dawn's friends had shown her a porno one time and she remembered very distinctly guys rubbing their cocks to stay hard, or women doing it for them, so Dawn decided to try that.
Sliding her hand up and down the shaft first caused RJ to moan, and then his dick started to slowly grow under Dawn's soft grip, quickly more than doubling in length. It was quite a sight for Dawn to behold. Sure she had seen it in the porno, but this was different, this was real life, this was her life and it excited her to see a cock growing before her eyes.
Biting her lip Dawn continued to stroke RJ's cock, her eyes wandering up to his as she did so.
He was looking down at her, his entire focus on her, a look of need in his eyes but also a look of concern. He was obviously still expecting this to be some kind of prank. It was probably about time Dawn proved him wrong.
Taking a firm grip at the base of RJ's cock Dawn gently leant forward, slowly opening her mouth and then after a brief pause took the head of the dick into her mouth.
The second her lips closed around him RJ let out a long moan which filled Dawn with confidence and she began sucking her first real cock. The sucking only made RJ moan louder and oddly it made Dawn feel powerful.
Dawn wondered why that was and she quickly came to the conclusion that for once during sex she was the one in control. In all her time with her big sister over the last few days it was always Buffy who was in control no matter what they were doing but this was different. It made a nice change but Dawn had to admit that she preferred to be dominated.
As she began to slowly slide a little more of RJ's dick into her mouth Dawn couldn't help wish RJ would grab her by the hair and force her down onto his cock, burying the entire thing in her throat without a moments regard for her well being. But sadly it seemed RJ was more intent on moaning like a moron. He wasn't even calling her names. Oh well, at least his prick was big and juicy.
RJ's shaft tasted good and it was leaking a tasty liquid which Buffy would later tell Dawn was called pre-cum. In this moment in time Dawn didn't know what it was called but she liked it and she wanted more of it. Luckily the more Dawn sucked the more liquid was produced and the more RJ's cock pulsated inside her mouth. That was another thing Dawn liked about RJ's cock. It pulsated with every beat of his heart, which obviously made this very different to when she had sucked her sister's strap on last night, which was the closest thing she had come to before now to sucking a cock.
Thinking of her dear sister reminded Dawn that Buffy was still on the phone in her pocket, listening in on her as she acted like a total slut, giving a boy she barely knew a blow job in a public bathroom stall. The idea that her mistress was listening in on them really got Dawn's juices flowing. She briefly considered sliding her hand down to her panties and getting herself off as she sucked on her first real cock, but Dawn quickly remembered she had been forbidden to do so by her mistress and, eager not to disobey her mistress, Dawn concentrated all her efforts on getting RJ off.
After sliding only a few inches into her mouth at a time for what felt like forever Dawn started to slowly go lower on RJ's dick until the shaft was pressing against the back of her throat, Dawn lightly choking on her mouth's invader. Dawn came up for air, taking RJ's manhood out of her mouth to give her a chance to catch her breath before bobbing her head back down and getting back to work. Wanting to try and get all of him in her mouth Dawn concentrated on keeping her gag reflex under control as she attempted to go even lower, RJ's shaft once again hitting the back of her throat only this time she tried to push it further, trying to convince herself to allow the man meat to slide down her gullet, but her inexperience caught up with her and she began choking on his dick again until she was forced to take it out of her mouth for another few breaths.
Dawn tried this over and over but it was hurting her and eventually she gave up and just stuck with taking most of RJ's cock, promising herself she would beg her wonderful mistress to teach her the art of deep throating.
Wanting to make a lack of being able to deep throat up to RJ Dawn intentionally salivated more than usually necessary, making her mouth as wet a home as possible for his cock, the little brunette noisily slobbering all over the prick in an attempt to make it as wet and slippery as possible.
In addition to the wetness Dawn increased the pace of her head bobbing, beginning to stroke the bottom of RJ's shaft, caressing all the places her mouth couldn't reach as her mouth began working overtime.
Through all this RJ was moaning as he tried to comprehend what he was feeling. He had always wanted to know what a girl's lips wrapped around his cock would feel like an now he knew RJ was determined to get his cock sucked as much as he possibly could.
RJ wondered if all girls were this good at giving head or if it was just girls like this one. He knew nothing about this girl but surely there was only one type of girl who would give head to a random stranger, and that type of girl was a slut. Not that there was anything wrong with that. In fact RJ had to say in his opinion sluts were awesome. If this was an example of a slut he was definitely going to stop going after the popular girls and start going after the sluts. Or maybe he should just go after this slut, after all, this was a hell of a first impression.
The brunette's lips sliding up and down his shaft felt like pure heaven, her warm, wet and willing mouth pleasuring him in ways he couldn't have imagined before now and RJ was impressed with himself that he lasted as long as he did before the desire to cum became unbearable.
After holding off for as long as he could RJ grabbed a firm hold of the sides of the toilet, cried out and came in Dawn's mouth.
Dawn's only warning of what was about to happen was a growing pulsation and jerking from RJ's cock and that wasn't enough to prepare her for the first jet of his hot spunk hitting the back of her throat. Choking on RJ's cream Dawn let go of his cock and let it fall out of her mouth as she choked up a little cum, before swallowing most of it down.
In the time it took her to do that RJ had grabbed his cock and started jerking it before pointing it in Dawn's face. He'd seen this in lots of porno movies and if this really was a slut she would like what he did next.
Dawn gasped as RJ's sperm landed on her face, the next squirt landing in her open mouth. Caught up in the moment Dawn decided to go with it, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue as she let RJ cum on her face like she was some kind of porn star.
It was the most powerful orgasm of RJ's life, and it was only made better by the fact he was able to paint this girl's face with his load.
When he was finally done Dawn licked seductively around her lips, collecting cum on her tongue and then holding the cum out on her tongue to show it to RJ before closing her mouth, loudly swallowing, and then showing RJ her tongue again so he could see it was all gone.
Fuck, he thought, that was hot.
Who was this girl?
With her mission accomplished Dawn stood up, smiled at him, turned around, unlocked the door and left the toilet stall.
Amazingly no one had come in while Dawn had been sucking RJ's cock and the little brunette had to admit she was a little disappointed. She would have quite liked the humiliation of being caught. Oh well, maybe next time.
Looking at her cum covered face in the mirror Dawn couldn't help feel a sense of pride at her accomplishment.
Seeing RJ step out of the stall with his pants around his ankles Dawn smiled and made a show of scooping his cum off her face and into her mouth, making sure to moan with every drop of man goo she swallowed.
He just watched her intently as she finished her creamy meal before beginning to leave.
"So... can I see you again?" RJ asked.
Dawn thought for a minute.
"Maybe." Dawn said thoughtfully before leaving the boys bathroom, feeling more confident than she had ever done in her entire life.
Skipping back to the girls bathroom Dawn checked underneath the stalls, happily finding she was alone again. Taking her phone from out of her pocket she brought it up to her ear.
"Hello." Dawn said, wondering if her mistress was still on the line.
"Hello slave." Buffy said down the line.
"Hello mistress." Dawn said smiling, "I did it."
"I know." Buffy said, "Did you enjoy it?"
"Oh yes mistress, it was great." Dawn said before quickly adding, "But it wasn't as good as serving you mistress."
"Good to hear." Buffy chuckled, "I guess we can safely conclude you're not a lesbian then."
"No mistress, I'm not a lesbian, I'm just a slut." Dawn said.
"Maybe, but don't forget that you're not just a slut, you're my slut." Buffy said.
"Yes mistress, I'm your slut." Dawn said.
"Good girl," Buffy said proudly, "It makes me so happy knowing my slut knows her place, just as it made me happy to hear you suck that boy off. I got so hot listening to you suck cock that I almost came just from listening to you. And now I really, really want to watch you suck cock. Would you like that Dawnie? Would you like your mistress to have you suck cock for her amusement? Would you like your mistress to take you out tonight so your mistress can find you a guy to suck? Maybe if he's lucky I'll let him fuck you. After all your body belongs to me so I can whore you out anyway I see fit. Better yet maybe we could find a guy to join us in our bed, wouldn't that be fun Dawnie? You, me, some other guy, having fun together, and then when he leaves your mistress can punish you for being a naughty little slut. How does that sound to you Dawnie?"
Dawn smiled and said the only thing that came to her mind.
"That sounds wonderful mistress."
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