Passion, Pain and Pleasure | By : Jendeh Category: -Buffy the Vampire Slayer > FemmeSlash - Female/Female > Buffy/Faith Views: 15722 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
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A/N: Okay so what is happening here?! This is a rewrite of a previous chapter 3 I posted. And to make a long story short the previous chapter three sucked. I mean I thought the writing was okay, but the plot devices were cheap. This is why people do betas right? Anyways when I was conceiving where to take this story I had two ideas. The first (now deleted) was multiple prophecies which would converge into a super climax of epic proportions (okay not really...) and the second was much simpler. And that is where we are going now. If you read the first version of chapter 3 and thought 'I'd rather eat from a baby's diaper than read this crap!' then please give me another shot. :) A few things remain the same as there were parts I really liked. But most of it hit the trash heap. Much shorter chapter, but I didn't want to force it again. More soon!
A/N2: Thanks Oric13. I needed that. Best feedback I could have gotten. I didn't really like it either and all of your points were valid most especially the one about the Mayor. I just needed someone else to say it I think. For everyone else, see I really do read reviews. :) So thanks for your thoughts!
Chapter Three
January 2010
I used to be a hero. The honest to God save the world and protect the innocent kind of hero. I was The Chosen One and most of the time I'd say I hated it. I viewed my calling as a burden, and it was. One girl in all the world? Seriously? That was awesome in the way its not. I was given a death sentence when I was 15 years old. Unfair is an understatement. I hated that life sometimes, but given the choice now, I'd love to go back to that girl and tell her she had everything. I traded being a hero for being Faith's whore. I'm standing nude in our bathroom in front of the the full length mirror gazing at her handiwork. FAITH carved into my stomach. And below that a heart with a stake in it. I can't help but laugh bitterly as I consider that this is Faith's twisted version of romance. God help me if she ever proposes. The cuts are throbbing, but look like they are going to heal soon. I always heal quickly these days. Faith broke my arm in two places a few weeks ago and it was good as new six days later. I wonder if perhaps the Slayer power grows stronger the longer I stay alive. Staying alive isn't hard. Despite her frequent outbursts of anger and cruelty, Faith would never let me go. I run my fingers over the wounds on my stomach. The pain is immediate and exhilarating. Ten years now there has been sick part of me that aches for the searing agony I receive at Faith's skilled hands. These perverse desires disgust me to my very core, but I can't help but to submit willingly and completely to my lover. My lover. Faith. Faith whose vicious touch has harmed me countless times. I could say that I hate the things she does, but that would be a lie. Those times when she forces me down and violates me to the point that I am torn and screaming in pain and pleasure, those are the times when I feel most alive. I hate that I yearn for her. I hate that she yearns for me too. I want to hate Faith for the cruelties she cheerfully exacts upon my body. I don't, but I do hate myself needing her to do it. I hate that her name carved into my stomach thrills me. She said that she loves me. I believe her. I think I've known for awhile now, but I can't even wrap my mind around the idea of it. I knew love once and it was nothing like this. The people who loved me didn't beat me, fuck me til I bled or carve their names into me. Still I have no doubt. Just as I belong to her, she also belongs to me. “My Faith,” I whisper as I once again graze my fingers along her name forever written across the plains of my flesh.
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