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OMG I love this one so far, you rock!!!

oh please update this is a great one!

Other than the 'switching tenses' parts, I like the story. Meaning, going from 'she walked' or 'she said' to 'she walks' or 'she says' in the same paragraph. It makes it a bit choppy and distracting. But it's a good theory for the story. I'm not a big fan of Buffy, post season five or so. But the thought of pre-major trauma Buffy with Xander is a good one. Though I truly believe that he belongs with Spike and she belongs... Well, picked on and made fun of *s* It's an interesting plot, I can already see the divergences. Can't wait to see where you take this. Do you plan to go all the way up through all the seasons, or diverge completely around/after the Harvest? It'll be interesting to see.
~Ang

Alright people there are warnings in my header as to what the pairing is. If you don't like BX then DON'T read it. I don't mind critisim as long as it's constructive. I don't need people reviewing the story saying that BX suxs or that they don't like that particular pairing. Because I can guarantee that those particular pointless reviews will be removed.

I don't like to be a bitch about stuff like this but if you don't like something then don't read it. No one is forcing you. Ok I've said my piece and now I am done.

This is an excellent fic!!!!! Love the story and liked how you went back to the start! More please!!!

Hey, I liked this one. I definately want to read more.

Great story so far. It shapin up to really twist all the BTVS fans minds. 'Specially that "immortal" thing. Nice touch. Can't wait for some Buffy/Xander lovin! How come the dates changed?

The dates changed for two reasons:

1) To fit my story, you'll see why eventually
2) I also didn't know ALL the exact dates to everything so this made it easier

New Chappie hopefully by Saturday