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Lucius is so Dead

good grief--this story is ALL OVER THE PLACE! i'm not sure what prompted you to drag in four different crossovers; you didn't really have time to do any of them justice or weave believable links between the characters. i wish you'd just stuck with one crossover...the combo of these five worlds doesn't really work. when i hit chapter 9, suddenly--without warning--i appeared to be reading a chapter from a harry potter story and i thought, uh-oh, she posted this in the wrong story. it was fairly late in the chapter before you tied it in with the buffystuff. yikes.

you've written some really wonderful stories, but i think you tried to cram too much into this one, and it doesn't really work. i was sort of curious as to whether you yourself got that feeling at all, as you were writing it? i suppose not or you wouldn't have bothered...

so, i'm sorry to not be able to be complimentary about this one. actually this is the ONLY story of yours i haven't liked. i'm not flaming you--far from it--and i see that your other reviewers did like it. but i'm assuming that if someone doesn't like a story, you' like to know why. 'nuff said.

Thanks for finally updating this! I've been waiting.

When is the next chapter? I would love to know if they find the man and demons that did this to their son. And destroy them.

Good, very good.

Please continue soon.

Please continue on. I want to see more..........