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for Coming Clean

by Roberta

person virginiajm
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with the previous poster about Buffy's immaturity level and her complete overreaction to not being asked to her prom. Get over it Buffy! I really enjoy this story, don't get me wrong, but I find Buffy's extreme selfishness and stubborness to see anyone elses' point of view but her own a total turnoff. If William ever needed proof that Buffy is not emotionally ready for a mature relationship that little episode gave it to him in spades. She might be "18" but she acts 13.
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person Jen
schedule July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was just too funny. I loved the way you had both Giles & Joyce find out. I was laughing hysterically with Joyce's come on and later embarassment. Too funny.
person Lisa Lee Gear
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
KOOL story! i love it! i can't wait to find out what happens when Joyce and Giles find out! plz update soon!
person Tammy
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I can't wait until the other part is done so i can read it... Other then that it is wounderfuul... well bye
person Jen
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you decided to continue Room Service - that was a fantastic story. This one is shaping up to be fantastic too! Very hot.
person Green_Ivy
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn! You did it to me AGAIN!!! I must say ... That was TOTALLY HOT!!! I think you just set me up with some VERY nice dreams for .... Say .... the next few years!! You have to start cranking out more! FAST! I loved the first story, But this is ever better! I know, they say good things come to those that wait! But .... *pout* ..... You have to type faster! Please!
This is ... WOW !!! I think you actually ... may have .... amazed me into speechlessness!!!!!


Happy Writing!

Green Gre
person Kenya
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I *really* love this series. I'm no Spuffy fan, but these characterst set seem like different people with the same names, so I can enjoy it! I hope you are planning to write more, and VERY soon!!
person Cin
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally! i've been waiting for the update to this story for quite a long time. i loved it of course. this story is going amazingly well. bravo! i can't wait for you to write some more. please don'ot leave us hanging for too long. this story is surely gonna have it's fan base anticipating the next ke keep updating!!!

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