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November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
One small technical note: you have a few verbs in present tense - not many, but it's a bit distracting as I'm reading.
You've done very well capturing Angelus' evil, as well as the struggle that Buffy is facing - being attracted to him physically while despising herself for it.
The lengths that Angelus is willing to go to in order to destroy her emotionally...
You've done a superb job of writing a very dark piece.
Thank you for sharing.