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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i loved this please write more have him enslave everyone
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July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An interesting start. I'm looking forward to where you take this.
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You must continue. I want to see Buffy and Dawn featured next. And more Cordelia too.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story but im really wondering where does it go from here? and who else will become a part of the Pack?
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You the same author from TtH? Either way decent read.
I think everything went way too fast though. The characters changed too fast and the story moved too fast. Slowing it down may enhance the story a bit. I'll still read the current form though.
I think everything went way too fast though. The characters changed too fast and the story moved too fast. Slowing it down may enhance the story a bit. I'll still read the current form though.
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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Minor detail. Joyce is not a red head so Xander did not pull her by her red hair.
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December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i read this the first time, and i have to admit its a lot better, love to see more reluctance from his new pack members though, then when they turn it will be sweeter