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Well the material appears that it does need work but it has a direction and it is decent. I think you should do a layout ( I do scribbles like this on my journals or in my head ) of the next 5 chapters or however so many you wish to do next to the goal you wish to succeed.

P.S. <---Buffy fan and expert. Also very analytical. If you need any editing or reviewing before posting, do let me know. :)

~Ex

Interesting. I can't wait to see where you decide to take this. Looks like interesting things will happen soon.