rate_review Reviews

Overall a pretty good chapter, although not as good as the first one IMHO.

Faith's taming is happening a lot faster than I thought it would.

I liked that Joyce wanted to screw her bitch again close to the front door where people could see them.

as a totally Buffy Summers walked in
totally what? did you mean "totally naked"?


Curious to see where you're taking this story...

Now that's an interesting way of writing Joyce!
I really liked this first chapter and I'm definitely interested to see where you're going with this.
Hope to see more soon.