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Part 19 - Chick with a Dick: Heh. Now this is something new.
I'm usually not that into the whole dickgirl genre, but Cordy sure makes for a sexy dickgirl.
And picturing her fucking Faith with her big dick makes for some hot visuals.

Chapter 18 - A Summers Christmas Party: Damn, those old bitches really put Faith thru the wringer!
There's something strangely exciting about those sadistic hags having their wicked way with a gorgeous sexy teen like Faith.
Good ending with the various whippings on the busty brunette's tender charms and her degrading masturbation exhibition.

Yet another well-written arousing chapter - well done, Tom.

Ohhh!!!! Nice chapter, it always brightens my day to see another chapter for this story. Faith & Giles maybe??? (I'm a massive fan of that pairing)

Chapter 17 - Two Naughty Nurses: Even though the whole "naughty nurses" scenario is probably one of the most used sexual roleplaying games (alongside "naughty catholic schoolgirl") you managed to write an entertaining take on it.

I sometimes feel like you kinda rush thru a scene or a chapter, but that definitely wasn't the case here as the naughty nurses performed plenty of kinky exams with their sexy patient (and it also seemed well-edited, which is also a big plus).

Good job, Tom.

Honestly, by now it's gotten a little boring. I don't understand your obsession on graphic strap-on scenes and very limited male involvement but never large scale male involvement; it's a theme prevalent across your body of works. Which... well, is interchangable. There's nothing that really differentiates between this and the last Faith-bashing fic you did. Hell, if I was the owner here, I could probably swap chapters between the two without people noticing.

Don't get me wrong 'cause the sex was pretty hot in this chapter, but what happened to the roleplaying idea we discussed?

Wow, that's quite a transformation Tara made in such a short time. Looks like Faith is really good at giving a gal confidence :)

Oh wow.... I love this! Can't wait to read more!

Excellent striptease scene!

Nicely done!
I really like how Faith has gradually developed a huge crush on Principal Snyder, of all people, considering that under normal circumstances she'd spurn that little troll. I guess she really enjoys having his big dick in her otherwise mostly clam diet ;)
The scene where Joyce and Snyder fuck Faith together was pretty damn hot.
And naturally, I really enjoyed Buffy & Willow class assignment - very well done. Although it would've been even better if they'd made Faith do other (kinkier) stuff besides fucking herself with a vibrator in front of the class. I'd also would've liked to read a few more details about Faith's photo-shoots & movies for the website.

Overall a good solid chapter, though it definitely could've used a thorough beta-reading before posting as I spotted several glaring grammar errors (some of which caused lines of dialogue to make no sense).