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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Naughti....What happened to you...it's been over a month since you last updated.....I think you owe us 2 chapter updates now LOL!! C'mon already!!
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why do you torture us so by making us wait soooooo long for updates?!!!!
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@9 lol awesome chapter. love the story! update soon
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@8. cool story update soon
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
forward is so hot...
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this story is hot. HOT. Smokin' HOT!
But it's not just hot, either. I can feel their connection, their complete trust in each other, so that makes it very loving as well as hot. Do you know what I mean? Not once did I feel that anyone was being cruel or that anyone was a victim or being humiliated. Which is not always easy to do, either. Some writers go a bit over-the-top to try to make a story seem really nasty of deviant, but I don't get any of that cringe-worthy stuff when I read your story and the way you've written it. I appreciate that more than you could know, seriously. Your style and technique in writing this story is actually very beautiful. It's written in such a minimalistic manner that anything else would be overkill, over-doing it, and because you keep it simple it makes it that much more. Really graceful, if that makes any sense. Anyway, I love it...you know, in case you didn't pick up on that.
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I hope there is more to come. Thank you for what you've written so far.
But it's not just hot, either. I can feel their connection, their complete trust in each other, so that makes it very loving as well as hot. Do you know what I mean? Not once did I feel that anyone was being cruel or that anyone was a victim or being humiliated. Which is not always easy to do, either. Some writers go a bit over-the-top to try to make a story seem really nasty of deviant, but I don't get any of that cringe-worthy stuff when I read your story and the way you've written it. I appreciate that more than you could know, seriously. Your style and technique in writing this story is actually very beautiful. It's written in such a minimalistic manner that anything else would be overkill, over-doing it, and because you keep it simple it makes it that much more. Really graceful, if that makes any sense. Anyway, I love it...you know, in case you didn't pick up on that.
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I hope there is more to come. Thank you for what you've written so far.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice: sweet and hot.
Good work.
Sandra*
Good work.
Sandra*
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Few points:
- Buffy (Sarah Michelle Gellar) has hazel/green eyes.
- Error: "think shirt" (line 13).
- Error: "I bet you wish that was me and your right now, huh?" (line 20)
Other than those; great - each chapter is short & sweet.
(Feel free to delete this post after corrections :)
- Buffy (Sarah Michelle Gellar) has hazel/green eyes.
- Error: "think shirt" (line 13).
- Error: "I bet you wish that was me and your right now, huh?" (line 20)
Other than those; great - each chapter is short & sweet.
(Feel free to delete this post after corrections :)