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I'm soo glad to see an update for this story! I've been waiting awhile for this one to come out again.
I don't get why William is so resistant to Xander??? Dude, if he likes him why doesn't he just try to be with him???
I bet that William will take it too far one of these times and then Xander will go elsewhere for his pleasure, which I bet William wouldn't like....
Anyways, great update and I can't wait for more!

Yup, still following the story, and I have to confess it's making me nervous. I think I sympathise with William: I really want to strangle Alexander. He's young and reckless and he doesn't understand the situation at all; he just wants William. He doesn't get that William can lose his name, reputation, fortune and even his freedom, if he's ever publicly accused of sodomy. And I don't get William neither, because he never punishes Alex at all. To see Alexander doing what he wants and never getting punished (mind me, seriously punished by William; sending him to his room is a pathetic excuse of a punishment) is what makes this story so surreal. Any other tutor would have sent the ward away on a trip to learn to do some trade or something, or would have gone on a trip himself to clear his mind. Or is that what you have in mind? The pain of separation? Or *shivers in agony* is William going to announce he's to be married?
As you can see, you keep me really interested in your fic, even when it's driving me nuts. I hope the situation turns out as good as the rest of your fics, because I really enjoy them. Even when I'm flummoxed :P Thanks for the fic, I'll keep reading :)

You're doing great. Posting in stealth mode and all. I love the way Alexander teases William until he gives in, men can be so stubborn at times. (I'm too lazy to login right now but I just had to leave some feedback) I'll be watching for more from this story. Keep udating plzzzz

wow. hot. i love it, update!

Sex on a horse... they must have great balance. It was hot. More soon please.

~Jace.

Oh. My. God.
I just discovered this story and have read it in one sitting and PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write more right now!!!!
I've always enjoyed Spike/Xander, but I think maybe 'bodice ripper' Spike/Xander might now be my new kink.
This is SO hot!
I look forward to the next installment with much anticipation!

mmmmmmm Very nice fic. very sad and very hott. Keep up the good work.

You are doing a wonderful job. I look forward to your continuing posts. Also, thank you for suffering for your cause. It isn't easy to write slash b/c other people just don't understand. Good Luck!

i love it! i'm not big into spander but I really like this one, Spike/william trying to fend off Xander/Alex is great! write more more more!

MORE MORE MORE absolutely fabulous! Would work just as well as original work as fanfic! Love it. MORE!