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for Consequences of 'What if'

by Jason

person D
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good so far. I'd suggest that you drop the exclaimation points in your narration. It looks cheesy.
person Jacen
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like to the whole new take on the evil Willow from Buffy. Looking forward to your new up-date and was also wandering if you plan to give good Willow and vamp. Xander some alone time.:)
person TJ
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Would definitely like to see more.
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon... looking forward to some willow on willow action... i'd also like to see a 3way with xander and the 2 willows!
person TJ
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to see more of this, but I suggest you get a beta reader to fix the spelling and grammar errors you have throughout the story. But it's a good idea for a story and I'd like to see what they get up to when they wake up!

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