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by BeautifulSinnocence

person anon
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh....just one question .....this fic...is interesting but just one complaint.....isn't this NC-17 ...well eight chapters and no fluffiness...Whatsamattau!!
person Paigie
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was pretty funny. The lack of sanity is very entertaining, so keep it up 'cause you're doing a great job.
person Someone
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this, please continue to update. I would say more, but I think I need to use the rest room after the booger to the mouth thing... Nice, was definately vivid.
person Ty
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi
First Happy New Year!!!! 2nd....How come you stopped updating this fic and "Malicious Beauty" ? I think they're both great fics and it would be a shame if you didn't finish them out. Please continue them both.
person BLU
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE......
person Joe
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just noticed that you also wrote "Malicious Beauty" as well.......You are a great writer......I really am enjoying both fics.....but wish you would update more often ...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just read the last chapter u posted. I'm really interested in what has caught the slayers! I can't wait to find out. Please update sonn!!!!!!!!!!!
person anonynonymous
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cutest ever. I wish the chapters were a little longer, but you sure do make up for it in updating frequently :D

You've certainly left me wondering how things are going to build up to all-out fuffy action. Can't wait. ;D
person B
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok. thats kinda nasty.
person Deb
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that's nasty!

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