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This is in response to the 'anon' comment above. What exactly are you talking about? "The "whisk-away" really sucked - I sort of knew what was going to happen, but it was so twisted and sadistic that I couldn't go on reading."

Yeah. I think we were supposed to be a bit clued in. The point? Buffy is oblivious . . . to damned near everything.

But what exactly was twisted and sadistic? There was no gore, no fighting, no rape, no bloodplay or over-the-top abuse. Buffy is supposed to believe that she's being abducted. Think about it . . .would Faith pick her up on a white stallion for her birthday? No. faith would do something to completely throw Buffy. Being pushed against a wall? Umm . . . doesn't Buffy always get pushed against walls? Even during sex? (Remember the Season 6 episodes with Buffy and Spike?) The sack was an added touch from Faith. There was no choking, no gagging, no . . . ANYTHING over the top.

You're too sensitive, dear anon reader. If you can't take a faked-out kidnap scenario, you should stop reading adult fanfic. Some people write some really violent scenes, even sex scenes, and they might give you permanent mental scars. ;)

I've left my email in case you'd like to continue this conversation; no need to hide behind anonymous reviews and add to bkitty's feedback count with this nonsense.

Faith is such an asshole, lol. Sorry but she is. If I was Buffy, I would have tossed the shirt at her face and told her to do it on her own if she was going to be such an ass. I say she deserved to be hit, lol.
Anyway, great update. I was so happy to see you updated :)
Can't wait to see what happens next! :) keep up the great work!

@26 awesome chapter. i wish they would just get together already lol cool chapter though. update soon

seeing Faith's breasts can't be good for her getting ready for her date with Toni, but maybe Toni will wear something Faith-like to distract her.

That fight scene was awesome, I'm really enjoying this story.

Nice! Great update, I love how the tension between them once again turns to a physical fight. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Zane

if Faith ends up bruising Buffy maybe Toni will play nursemaid for her. can't wait until Giles sees that the girls are exactly play acting.

Come on! Gimme something else, please!!!!

I beg!

Ciao,
M

Yeow! Poor Buff. Faith and all that smartass taunting. lol, but the end where Buffy kicked her ass somewhat was actually good. lol, I can't help it.
I am glad to see you update. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for this :)

Keep up all the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved it always did.. god this story is the best ive read.. i really hope u update.. thanks for the great read.