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for Mangled Spells and Manly Bits

by LitGal

person alice2
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was a really good story, BUT not a M/M. I kept waiting for the change back. If the sequel makes it M/M I will rate it higher. Again I did enjoy the story as M/F.
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
need i say more love this story
person Alice
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*does a jig* Sequel, sequel, sequel!!!
person E
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, and I hope you do decide to continue it. Long as it doesn?t make everybody (Spike and Xander) miserable of course:)
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brill got to do a squel tot his story look forward to it
person TheShadowCat
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I'd love a continuation. But one to two weeks? AAAHHHHH!!!! I don't know if I can last that long.
person TheShadowCat
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good update, but I do have one complaint. You kind of need to draw out the sex scene a little. You did the foreplay great, but the actual sex part was over before it even started. Still loving this story though.
person Alice
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! The foreboding foreshadowing! I have so many questions: will they find Xander, will they make Xander a man again, will Spike want male Xander, will there be ninja monkeys? So many pressing questions. Very good writing, good characterizations. I really enjoy it. And good work on the Xander babble
person TheShadowCat
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wonderful. Can't wait for the next chapter and Xander's reaction when s/he realizes what's just happened.
person Alice
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drools* Very nice. I like all of Xander girls mental babble. Very fun. I like this story

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