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by jasonsnene

person asydnes
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Due to RL issues, I'm afraid that I'd fallen a couple of chapters behind. However, I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed catching up on them. :D I certainly hope that the vamps and Oz can find out what's apparently still going on with Xander magically. I don't think they will be able to rest comfortably until they do, always having to worry about a new threat to their relationship with him. More soon, please!

*Mwah*
Dae
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww to short.... hope to see more!
person amelia87
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaauwww!O_O I CANNOT Begin to explain to U how Much I Truly LOVED this Absolutely AWESOME & Utterly MIND-BLOWING Work of Wonderfully Well written & Utterly FABULOUS fiction ^_~!!!
(I mean a small example = I've been on this site 4 quite a while now & (although I feel a bit guilty to admit it^_^;) read many Many stories;P, ranging from great to not so great^_^;; But this = the 1st story that I felt Soooo COMPELLED to review -Or rather attempt to let u know how much I enjoyed it in my sleep-deprived, (& utterly Blown-Away, from ur -Overwhelming- talent &) having read all 37 chapters in 1 night, state;P That I Actually found myself Reading ALL the Rules & Creating an Account, as I felt that I Just HAD to let u know how much Ur Captivating characters Bewitched me, Ur Vivid portrayls of everything -from nerve wracking emotions & spine chilling suspense to Floating-Away on A cloud of Sugary Sweet Fluff Romance- were made so utterly Believably REAL, that they swept 1 away & made u Actually go through Everything the utterly Enchanting & completely Captivating characters do! There4 sending 1 on such A wild roaller coaster ride of Mind-Boggeling proportions, that 1's left utterly Dazed & Breathless (drooling 4 more ;D) All though THAT Might have been caused by Ur Devinely DELISHIOUS, Sentually HOT -Sizzeling SEX-scene's, as well ;D!! However I must stress that it was in fact the Wonderfully Wicked Witty banter, Completely COMPELLING characterizations & interactions, Enthralling & EXCELLENTLY Portrayed Plot twists, SUPERB Storylines & Overall OUTSTANDIND nature of ur Wonderfully Well written work, that Drove me to TRY & find the words to give this Gem of BRILLIANCE the praise it -so Richly- DESERVES (rather unsuccsesfully as I've just noticed;p) 4 alas no mere words could possibly describe How MUCH I Absolutely ADORE this WONDERFULLY Amazing World U've created^_^ & will hopefully -SOON;D- Invite us Back to, by giving (ALL those uttery ADDICTED fangirlz out there -who were too lazy to Review, but yet still Equally DESPERATE 4-) MORE ^_~!!!)
So I there-4 hope U'll Simply accept the fact that I Cherished this SUBLIME story, More than words can convey & that I implore u (for the Sake of -what's left of- my Sanity) to Continue this Endlessly Promising & Infinitely FASCINATING fic ^_^ (& PLZZZ let me know when u do, -so that I can come bother u with some more Randome Rambling/Ranting/Raving/ ALL of the above disguised as an actual Review-;p *Gives U the Patented-Puppy-Eyes-Xander-look, topped off with the Tm-U-Know-U- WANT -To-Spike-Smirk* ^_~!!!
person amelia87
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
P.S. I forgot to mention the actual chapter O_o -that had this E-V-O-L Enough Cliffie;p, to make me subject u to my ramblings *_*- in the 1st place+_+ "Oeps" ^_^; Anyway.... the way chapter 37 ended I got the distinct feeling that this might end up into a 4-some (Crosses fingers & hopes 4 some Even HOTTER Werewolf-Human-Vampire's -in A Deviously DELISHIOUS & Devinely droolwoorthy sandwich- Sex *Lecherous grin to be inserted here*;D) Also I'm getting a "weird vibe" that this spell (that Willow "Un-cast" off Xander) = the reason he's Always been such A Total demon-magnet & coz of the whole "being claimed thing" (but perhaps being Unable to "Accept his claim", coz of his own feelings of emotional turmoil) = Still essentially A huge demon-magnet, but now = Inspiring feelings of Protective-ness (&/or Possesive-ness) in them, INSTEAD of Just attracting (half)demons (I mean think about it ppl, his 1st "REAL" Relationship was with a Vengence-demon, so I even -kinda-have canon -sorta, if ya squint at it- to back up my Crazy-Conspiracy theories -4 once-^_^;;) Anyways if I'm even anywere NEAR the vicinity of the right track PLZ let me know -So that I can spend the whole day giddy with glee;P- & if I'm not PLZZZ Update SOON ;D -coz as U might have noticed patience = NOT my Strong suit (Since it tends to make me ramble -A LOT-;p) So PLZzzz 4 the sake of (what's left) of my sanity Write MUCH More SOON- Coz the Suspense = (literally) Killin me^_~!!!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Boy this is a mess. If what is going on with Xander is affecting Oz there will be trouble. Angel laying into them was great and they really do need to find a solution and who cast the spell. Xander is wrong though it might have started out as a way to help Xander but I really do think that Angel and Spike really do love and care for Xander. Great chapter update soon.
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! new chapter. Great new chapter hope to see more!
person asydnes
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm just reading this for the first time and managed all 36 chapters in one fell swoop. ;) I really like this story, and I can't help but wonder what Oz's role in all of this will turn out to be. Hope to see an update soon! :)

*Mwah*
Dae
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome new chapter! Hope to see more soon!
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oz is sure taking advantage of the situation. Xander had ask for space and Oz thinking that didnt include him is just not right. I hope Xander chases him as well. All Xander needs is time and no one wants to give that too him. I wouldnt be surprised if the spell didnt originate in England. Willows denial and her not willing to look into it is odd. I hope they find something soon. Update soon.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter. Hope to see more soon~

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