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April 6, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Interesting story but is there a formatting problem? Chapter's 12 & 13 seem to be identical while chapter 14 looks like somethings missing. Has C13 being replaced by a copy of c12 in some way?
Otherwise a good story and enjoyed reading it. :)
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April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the nc17 was nice. although u could have gone with a little more detail.