rate_review Reviews

Once again an absolutaly fabulous job. Your skill in writing simply wonderful erotica is only emphasized by your talent in weaving a glorious and believeable plotline into it. I await every update of your fiction anxiously because I know I will never be able to guess where your tale will take us next. Keep them coming Rhi.

Rhiannon, wonderful. You have got to write more and soon. I'm loving your Angel. But that ended with a cliffhanger, will Angelus be set free? Please more soon!

WoW! What a great story! Will Angel become Angelus? Write more soon. Loved it!

Ch. 4 Wow! Goodness, this is hot stuff. I think I'm drooling all over my keyboard. I'm going to have to take a cold shower. :D I hope all the other chapters will be as good as this one.:P

What an emotionally intense ride! Wow - I had tears in my eyes through most of Chapters 1 - 4. And I just wanna scream at dear ol' Cordy!! Another great story, thank you. :)

Love your fics all of them......


and ooooooops , can we be expecting a bit of Angelus now after the whole bangel-shebang*

Ch. 3 Thanks for this fic, DR. It's deeply harrowing and pulls no punches just like the best of your stories. The description of Buffy's eyes was detailed and suitably graphic. You're a very adept and artful storyteller. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

I like the idea its intriguing. Angel seems something of an condescending ass though considering his less that stellar demonstrations of intelligence i.e. Darla and Angelus he has a hell of allot of nerve lecturing anyone on selfishness when hes kicked her to the curb in regards to his life.

A powerful beginning. The nature of a slayer's life is such that it's not surprising a permanently crippled slayer would entertain thoughts of suicide. Slayer-suicide stories can be done wrong so easily. Where I think you've set it up well, so far, is that the act isn't rooted entirely in self-pity, though that is certainly a strong point. Buffy has suffered greatly, and her pity isn't discarded. But there's also an element of duty in there as well. Depression is a real problem for her, and presuming she survives the suicide attempt, something her loved ones have to help her deal with.

I also like the way you handled Cordelia's failure to disclose the vision. It didn't appear to be willing or petty, but Cordy being a bit dim and self-involved. Perhaps something of a flashback to the Homecoming episode...

Wow I love all your stories and this one is great, please update quickly! Will Spike be coming back????