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by spangle4ever

schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!
person Jenn
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, amazing and brilliant are the words that come to mind. I a lways liked Joyce on the show and I'm glad you made her thier mom. It was a great chapter with a lot of emotion, I really enjoyed it. Update soon please you have me hooked on this story!
person Jenn
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still loving it! I can't wait until Angel's mom comes. I'm really happy you updated I hope you do again soon, I just love this story so much. It has real emotion and well it's just great.
person Jenn
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! you updated, I was all excited when I saw. I loved this chapter, Will and Angel are really cute together. Poor William his parents are such cruel bastards. I like how Angel calls Will "Little One." I really like this story a lot it is my favorite! your a great writer and very creative. Well keep up the great work I can't wait for the next chap! :)
person Spikeswilngslav
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Really good chapter. Thank you for rescuing William and getting him out of there. Now, will it last? Or will his parents(especially that prick of a father) mess it up?
I can just picture them going all "concerned parent" and playing up to the cops/dss to get their "beloved" son back. Grrrrrrrrrrr Please don't let them! Don't let that rotten bitch touch him again! Or that sick perverted bastard!

I really do have a life....I swear! *grin* Just happens to be virtual that's all *pout*
So? What do ya say? Fix our poor William?
person ukebishounen
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, you ask a review and here is, i has to admit , that your history is...... good , hihi, angel is a love and will ahhhhh, hi es so cute. by the way , i allways check this history soooo keep writing ok.
person Spikeswilngslav
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! My heart is broken. *sniff* Poor William! I want to rip off Giles' dick, and shuv it down his throat! Grrrrrrrrrr
I want to tear Buffy's hair out by the roots and beat her w/a broken broomstick! Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I want to hug William, rock him and cuddle him, and take away the pain.
My OTP is Spander, and yet I felt compelled to read your story, because I love forbidden romance. And w/ a 15 yr old William, and a (20 something?) Angel, you got a great recipe for smut. What I found was bittersweet romance, heart wrenching dialouge/plot line/imagery, and one hell ofauthauthor.
PLEASE write more!!! NOW PLease! Right now!..............What are you still doing here?! Go write more of "daddy"!

*clears throat, calms down, looks sheepish* Is this what you had in mind when you begged for reviews? Hope it brings us another chapter.
person Jenn
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2- Yay you updated!!! It's sad but I like it. I hope you continue to update because it's a great story so far.
person Jenn
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It's sad because Will gets abused but I like how Angel is there for him. Great story I can't wait for more!!!

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