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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrific chapter B/S are so like an old married couple. It's sooooo cute.
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All the way through you get the spelling of 60 seconds wrong. It should be "minute" but you spell it "minuet".
A "minuet" is a dance popularised in the 17th century.
Other spelling and grammar mistakes spoil a pretty good story.
A "minuet" is a dance popularised in the 17th century.
Other spelling and grammar mistakes spoil a pretty good story.
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"??When it rains, it pours.??
yup n wen it purs it reigns! (sorry TV ad :D) i lt, ct, cant w8 4 more! please, please, please dont let Faith n Spike get it together in Buffys body like Joss did wit Riley! please! more soon, cant w8 cya x
yup n wen it purs it reigns! (sorry TV ad :D) i lt, ct, cant w8 4 more! please, please, please dont let Faith n Spike get it together in Buffys body like Joss did wit Riley! please! more soon, cant w8 cya x
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was soooo Joyce made me feel all nostalgic. Like how you introduced Dawn, smoooth.
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The last couple of chapters have been wonderful. I love how Joyce finds out. Also, a good way to introduce Dawn!! Keep up the awesome work!!
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter.
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more! cya x
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...That was an absolutely fabulous chapter!! Loving the story; Can't wait to see what happens next!! Update soon.
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter.
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT story! I've been glued to it every chance I get, and now I'm waiting VERY impatiently for the rest of it! Great writing, keep it up.