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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but difficult to read. Punctuation errors and no capitals where they belong. Funny idea,
though, keep it going.
though, keep it going.
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March 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Great fic so far. Keep it up.
Luv Kat
Great fic so far. Keep it up.
Luv Kat
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March 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was not so bad, actually I liked it. There were a couple of grammar problems, but who doesn't have them, if you had a beta, it would have been fixed anyway. Keep up the good work. ; j
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March 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great smut baby, can't wait for more. I love it, so much spuffy goodness is good for the soul.
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March 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Its perfectly ok................
youll get better in time........
Now were going somewhere............
all my love.........
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March 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I love it. Please continue.
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March 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea what the others were thinking, but I was enjoying the chapters. I can't wait for the other chapters to come around.
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March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! Luv Ditto xxoo
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March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought that the first couple chapters were pretty good. Keep it up!
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March 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The story is great, keep going but i'm a bit disappointed you're not going to really make it NC17. Sorry BS pervert here lol.