rate_review Reviews

Out of all the Andrew/Jonathan/ Warren fics I've seen on this site I have to say this is the best one. You've captured the characterizations very well, I like the bit where they do a spell to make the chicks like them but ends up backfiring very typical of them! However some of your writing might need a bit of beta'ing as some of your grammar and spelling is a bit wonky... other than that is was good...

Jumana