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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For a PWP your story wasn't bad. But I had problems with the setup with Snyder. As I said, I know it is a PWP story, but I felt you violated Joyce's character just a bit too much. She wasn't that dumb to fall for the whole blackmail bit and it sort of bothered me. Now this was just my opinion and I hope you write more.