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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
everythings great about the story..
i just think they scream 'a bit to much' 'over the top'...
when they have sex.. you dont really make them moan they
just screamed a lot... tone it down a bit so u make it more real
and he needs to talk dirty to her .. we need to hear spike say nasty dirty things to buffy!!!!
and i mean DIRRTY!! ;D
i just think they scream 'a bit to much' 'over the top'...
when they have sex.. you dont really make them moan they
just screamed a lot... tone it down a bit so u make it more real
and he needs to talk dirty to her .. we need to hear spike say nasty dirty things to buffy!!!!
and i mean DIRRTY!! ;D
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
and URK*
seems like everyone wants to do a '16 yold buffy gets pregnant by an older spike'
these days... dont make her pregnant before 18....
do something thats more original... she can get pregnant later on
if u really want.... i mean why be one of the atleast 10 autors who are or were writing '16 yold buffy gets pregnant fic'
seems like everyone wants to do a '16 yold buffy gets pregnant by an older spike'
these days... dont make her pregnant before 18....
do something thats more original... she can get pregnant later on
if u really want.... i mean why be one of the atleast 10 autors who are or were writing '16 yold buffy gets pregnant fic'