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just so...

like reading all your finish and unfinish written work.

keep up the good writing.

I really like Faith's point of view in this piece--it's the strongest aspect of the story. Buffy's is weaker but okay. I like the concept, but I think the ending would be more powerful if it didn't end sort of happily. Just a personal opinion, but I'm a sucker for angst. It works well as a short piece, but it could be longer and even more fun. Of course, again, that's my desire to read more Fuffy talking. Great job--looking forward to more of your stories.