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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you've got going here, but it would be so much better if you spell checked it. Not the computer type of spell check, but the read-thru type. The computer automatically corrects some things, and it made your story seem a little wonky in some places. If you went back thru it, your story would be great.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! That was sooooooooooo mean! I love the angst too, but happy ending, happy happy ending!
Please write a sequel to this, I would like to see how this ends.
Please write a sequel to this, I would like to see how this ends.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please make a sequal I relly liked that, it was good
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!!! Please continue....