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by patty

person Blazing Fire
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This part made great sense. I love your stories. Hope to see more when you can.
person C.B.
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Patty, that was PERFECT!!! I'm a firm believer in introducing Loritab into the water supply, though. ;) Wouldn't we ALL feel a tad bit happier? Just screwin' about. Good chapter.
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Made lots of great sense. And it's so exciting to have two chapters so close together. Thanks, and I can't wait for more.
person Mariana
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
and as always awesome!! amazing!!!
it just swelled my heart...so beautiful...really
tx for this wonderful story (for all of them actually)...i'll stop my inarticulated babbling now ;)

PS: really really hope you update soon!!!
person Dee
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just found your fic and it is GREAT. I love Melanie she is so cute. Please hurry and update again soon :)
person Hannah
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this story! I love William, I want one! *pouts* Anyways, keep going!!
person 019?019
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There's gonna be a 'Spike meets Angel' chapter soon, isn't there? I can sense it, I can feel it, I can practically see it! *calms down*
Looking forward for more!
person willowmouse
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story, so glad your sticking with it.
person lovesbitca37
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, i love melanie and william's characters. He bought toys for her :) How sweet!
Can't wait for the 'fathers breakfast' day!
person Witchie
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want a Melanie and a Spike. You've created a heartwarming, sexy story, and I love it.

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