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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your fic. The suspense, the heated romance. At the end I thought I would choke I laughed so hard!
Good job
Good job
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story and It's well written my only complaint with it - if you can call it a complaint - is that it was a little to quickly written in places and seemed rushed. it was a brilliant idea and might have been better a little longer - it watremtremely well written and so it was easy to read and get into.
Loved the ending. Excellent.
Loved the ending. Excellent.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent!!!!
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was ok, but I really think you should add a warning in the summary, saying that it contains angst.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this. It had a good plot and things moved along quite nicely.et tet the feeling you could've actually made this into a slightly longer story. The basic structure for it is already there. There were scenes that would be terrific fleshed out and explored a bit more. Like, maybe scenes from Warren's mind or Andrew's. I'm kind of interested in seeing the next few months and what happens to Spike and Buffy next. But I digress, this is a good story and I really liked it.
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I loved the reference to Pretty Woman with the diamond. Funny, thanks
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story...loved the part about warren and andrew! He bought her a dimond ring...so soon, but i guess it works. I hope there's going to be a sequal, cuz i know i'll read it!
Burningfairy07
Burningfairy07
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new story, it was really good and the circumstances of how they met were really original too :)
SB
SB
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this. Are you considering extending the story?