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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...now we're talking, adding Angel into the mix.
From what i can tell, you're gonna either have Angel be slightly obsessive (the flinching thing?) or you'll have William go off his rocker with that jealousy problem he has....hmmm?
Or maybe you'll surprise us, and go off totally in another, very inventive and interesting direction.
So...enough of the sucking up (just trying to bribe you for another chapter...) GET ON WITH IT!
:D
Nicky
From what i can tell, you're gonna either have Angel be slightly obsessive (the flinching thing?) or you'll have William go off his rocker with that jealousy problem he has....hmmm?
Or maybe you'll surprise us, and go off totally in another, very inventive and interesting direction.
So...enough of the sucking up (just trying to bribe you for another chapter...) GET ON WITH IT!
:D
Nicky
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see that you posted a new chapter of this, and then I read it, and, well... I don't think excited quite covers it any more. Yowza, was that lovely, sweaty, hot sex! Good job, and the use of a safe word was an excellent touch, especially considering Buffy's previous experiences.
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This gets better everytime...
I'd really like to archive this on my site once it's up and running, if you'll give me permission?
Nicky
I'd really like to archive this on my site once it's up and running, if you'll give me permission?
Nicky
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story!
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.....that's just an evil place to leave off. Can't wait to see how the "school uniform" night goes! Please update soon! This story is so great....I get the feeling we haven't heard the last from Riley!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SLUGGIE! You wonderful amazing author you! ahaha, now hurry up and write me another chapter! :D
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Write soon...
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Another awesome chapter! :D I love his story more and more each chapter! :D Can't wait for more!! :)
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, a sweet chapter.
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It worked quite well. I enjoy your stories, but if I had a wish list...
1. I wish you'd stop dropping your h's ('andle, 'ell, 'ot, etc...). It interrupts the flow of your dialogue.
2. I wish you'd put more space between your sentences. They're starting to run together in a fuzzy way. (Or maybe that's just my eyesight)
I am in no way critical of the story itself. It's good and steamy, and you tell it well. Even if you pay no heed to my opinion and continue on the way you have been, I'll keep reading it.
1. I wish you'd stop dropping your h's ('andle, 'ell, 'ot, etc...). It interrupts the flow of your dialogue.
2. I wish you'd put more space between your sentences. They're starting to run together in a fuzzy way. (Or maybe that's just my eyesight)
I am in no way critical of the story itself. It's good and steamy, and you tell it well. Even if you pay no heed to my opinion and continue on the way you have been, I'll keep reading it.