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c'mon update.. I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it i lovedit

Its a good one!
Scoobies versus Buffy, lets bring it on!
Xan defending his pack, Buffy will have no luck!
[Angel&Lorne?! Never would have thought of that! Strange but strangly ok. Or?]

Well, I'm usually leary of buffy-bashing stories, but it looks like you are building very credible reasons for your portrayal of her. Your story is moving at a brisk pace that makes me want to find out what happens next, always a good thing in a story. You have me giggling with everybody's interaction with Lorne and I can't wait to see how you givefy wfy what's comming to her for her power-hungry attitude. Please keep writing and I wonder what'll be Buffy's explaination as to what she's been doing with all of Angel's money. Shopping sprees perhaps? I expect to cackle more than once and hopfully because of Buffy's stupified expression when she realizes that soul-permanent Angel prefers a male green demon from another dimention over her perfectly dyed blond self.