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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes Happy Christmas for both of them I reckon. And smutty fun for us too.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"...Tall, Dark, and Tweedy..." Hahah, I love this line. Can I use it, please, please, please????
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your characterization is spot-on, especially through the dialogue, and you've captured Spike's 'voice' nicely. Anya's, too, I love her lines: "Oh, yes. Many of Riley's friends are quite muscular and look fully capable of giving me many orgasms. I think they will offer a pleasant diversion from wishing boils and leprosy on Xander for dumping me before Christmas." sounds exactly like her; I can practically hear her voice.
But please, if you love your readers, stay away from phrases like "turgid shaft"; it's tacky. There's a thread that's all about euphemisms and so forth here:
http://www.fictionalley.org/fictionalleypark/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=57141 if you want to look at it.
But please, if you love your readers, stay away from phrases like "turgid shaft"; it's tacky. There's a thread that's all about euphemisms and so forth here:
http://www.fictionalley.org/fictionalleypark/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=57141 if you want to look at it.