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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff, Xander is self-righteous self and all. More.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Liked the update for the most part. You write the erotica exceptionaly well. It's Xander that makes me uncomfortable. Does he always have to be such a prick? Not that your portrayal was anything but accurate. You have done a lovely job of setting up the next portion of the story. Xander's pou. A. Angelus is pissed and caged. Buffy has admitted to Spike that she loves him. Hmm, quite a nice little pot you have brewing. Can't wait to see it boil!
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this a while ago and then somehow missed some and didnt have the time to catch up. I just did and I'm soooooo glad I did :D
VERY good last chapter (as is the sory as a whole). God but Xander can be a jerk!
Sarah
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VERY good last chapter (as is the sory as a whole). God but Xander can be a jerk!
Sarah
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story; it's fun and sexy with some really intriguinot tot twists and spot-on character voices. If I may suggest though, changing your format to standard papragraph form would make it flow and read so much better - feel free to email me if you're not sure what I mean. Again, the story is great; it's just how it's formatted on the page that is detracting from it, very easy to fix :)
LA
LA
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just read the updates for this; loved 'em! You are doing such a great job on this story. I am glad you twiddled with the timeline. Faith can be a lot of fun when she isn't pathetically evil so kudos to you for ining ing her. I can't wait for more. Thank's.
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like the angelus twist, but where did faith go? and are they still all in high school, because in ch2 you had buffy heading for the library to train and then in ch7 their all at the magic box, and dawn's apperance makes the time line a bit confusing!! but i still like where it's all heading at the end of ch8
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! Please update soon. I love this story.
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story, very hot too lol. update soon.
SB
SB
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, Spuffy yummies. Please write more.