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for Sweet Sixteen

by patty

person Samolly
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The blow job scene was very realistic and I liked your approach - I always love when you get smutty, but it was very appropriate to have us use our imaginations there.
person white rabbit
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well it worked for me! i love the slow teasing feel you've managed to weave from one chapter to the next, a true one step at a time sexual exploration, just lovely and sweet. please update ASAP
person Charlene
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, so good!!

Please continue, as you have me on the edge of my seat!

*She says breathly*
person toni b
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!! that was GREAT!!! PLEASE FINISH IT!!!!!
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
for hte love of god please update... im on ch. 18 and you need to update girl....

great googly moogly this is soooo hot....

man i wish i ahd dated in high school, but i idditn have my first sexual experience until i was 20...pout pout...myabe its more fun when yer 16...

guess ill never know...so i have to get my thirlls vicariously thorugh fanfic...hehh heh heh...
person laura
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, i love this. it's so sweet! please keep writing, thanks so much
person Nicky
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! How sweet is this story? Please, keep it coming! They are sooo cute.

Mmm, virgin Sp



he he

Nicky
person tasha
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
god i love thic!!!c!!!!!!!!!!!
person Loresha
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sweet! I really like it.
person Samolly
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you started writing this again - please keep going!

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