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Mmm...no Buffy in this one. I like.

Good work with Wilkins' character. You do his voice well. Very enjoyable.

Another character? Goodness. You sure do like introducing them.

Your British dialogue always seems a little wooden to me, but I wouldn't worry about it too much.

Good job. I'm enjoying it. But when, oh when, do we get that slashy goodness you promised? I can't wait.

And of course, I'll reiterate my desire for you to hold off on the Spuffy. Or, never do it! Yay! That'd be awesome...but probably rabid shippers would get hot under the collar.

Keep on doin' whatcha do.

How long do we have to wait to see Buffy? and how long do we have to wait till she gets it on with Spike, do we have to wait for her to fuck the whole bloody cast.
Seeing Spike fucking Anya doesn't turn me on, sorry (remember a certain Season 6 ep.). As much as I like your other stories, this is becoming ridiculous .
And yet I'll go on reading because I still have faith in that spuffy side of you but you make it very difficult.
And if you intend to not make it Spuffy or not really spuffy (aka Buffy or Spike fucking everybody else) could you let us spuffy readers out here know about it so that we don't have to go through this?

Thanks for all the wonderful reviews! : D I love Spuffy, first and foremost. They WILL fall in love (though they will have other sexual partners). They are actually introduced in chapter 11. I'm very sorry for dragging this out like I have. I didn't intend to piss anyone off, I just wanted to tell the dirty story I had rolling around in my head.

Really cool fic cant wait for some more

THIS is SOO GOOD.
i hope we wont have to wait too long for buffy n spike to meet.
i mean they can meet a lot of chappies before the get it on'.
this is really good, Fecking good he he...
Ant thank you for the looong chapters ...More of it

Chapter Five was fun! Poor Harmony--such a twit. I was kind of surprised that you cut away from Xander and Spike sharing a bed--I figured Spike would go comfortably to sleep, but Xander would lay there with all sorts of scary gay ideas running through his head:-) Great work, very enjoyable.

Pretty good work, as usual. I know people are clamoring for Spuffy, but I hope you'll hold out on it. I'm enjoying myself.

Besides, Spike and Xander are far more interesting than Buffy. Can't wait for the seamy underbelly parts.

In short, don't let people rush you. There's enough Spuffy out there to tide them over.

I'm really enjoying your story. I hohat hat Buffy and Spike meet soon.

Just found this story, with four chapters written. Love it! Very, very hot. I'm really enjoying your characterization of William and Xander--they are both very appealing and it's fun to see the innocent, wide-eyed boys lose a little of their naivete. I noticed most of the other reviewers are asking for quick S/B, but I hope you draw it out awhile. Looks like our boys might be headed for a little bit of slashy fun, which would be all to the good, IMHO. Great job--I'm eagerly awaiting more!

Interesting...I don't generally go in for the whole AU thing, but it's fairly good.

You've introduced a lot of characters all at once. I wonder if that will cause you problems?

Personally, I could do without the whole Buffy thing entirely. I mean, I know that's your whole point, but...doesn't really do it for me. She's a bit too cute and naive, ne?

I can see that you\workworking up to some good things. Hope they arrive soon.

Pump up the kink.