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Reviews for Buddy's B-Day fic

By : jameschick
  • From ANON - Legolas\'s fanatical fan girl on December 27, -0001
    Not bad. A little more details, and this will be an excellent story.
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  • From ANON - jameschick on July 05, 2003
    No. I didn't mean Buffy. This was written for an on-line friend (Buddy) for her birthday. She's a fellow slasher like myself. Sorry if that confused you. I thought the title and the summary pretty much explained that.
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  • From ANON - ElizabethScripturient on July 05, 2003
    First, a nitpick: you did mean "Buffy" instead of "Bud" right?

    I didn't quite get how this was a birthday present for Buffy? I mean, was she sitting in a corner watching? It's a PWP so i'll excuse the lack of any explanation of Buffy wanting to see two guys going at it, but shouldn't be shown to be present, not just mentioned in "It's Buddy's birthday and I thought we should do something nice for her."

    The whole thing feels forced. I understand that it's a PWP, and i can totally get behind PWPs, but it just didn't work for me.
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