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Reviews for Dawn's Perfect Little Slayer

By : ToughLove
  • From Krulos on July 29, 2014
    Chapter 2, and finishing review of chapter 1.:
    Well, it seems these women are psychotic! Faith happy to be abused, Dawnie; the sadistic mistess, et cetera... this is WEIRD!
    In the previous chapter, it seems that Dawn is going to say "I said Kisses, B*tch!" (as in 'give me kisses')
    Now it seems as though Dawn invites Kit to abuse Faith on a date in the lavatories- What an idea!- a date in the lavatories!, pretty much saying "if you come to the club with me, you can play with her body, with or without her permission." Dawn also takes Faith on a break-in to someone else's house to 'play house' with her, so, this is, as I said, WEIRD!
    Creative idea: Dawn being Faith's mistress!
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    Krulos.
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  • From Krulos on July 29, 2014
    Chapter 1:
    Well, Dawn just enslaved, raped, and blackmailed Faith in the end into sleeping with her, threatening her all the while!
    At the end of the chapter she practically tells Faith "sleep with me.", she also practically stipped her too!
    The concept of Dawn as Faith's mistress is an interesting one- extremely interesting, that is!
    Man those women are messed up!
    Entertaining story, though. Dawn seems to have wanted a sex-slave, and made Faith fit the bill.
    Signed:
    Krulos.
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  • From ANON - River on June 29, 2012
    please updateeeeeeeeeee
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  • From KoshNaranek on September 25, 2011
    Realy good fic.
    I want more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2011
    Hottest make over ever!!!!! and it's not even over yet!!! Please say the next update is very soon cuz i can't wait to see what else dawn has in store. as for who discovers them i'm not a real fan of either buffy or willow cuz they both get on my nerves!!! so I don't knoow if this is allowed but i think giles would be a interesting choice.
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  • From ANON - Cal on April 05, 2011
    I don't know whether I'm liking the story. On the one hand, H.O.T. but Dawn is seeming seriously cold to Faith. I had hoped that Dawn would be a dom, but a nice dom. It would be nice to see more Soft Dawn, Tender Dawn. In terms of someone from the Dale, it can't be a dude so that removes Spike, Xander, Giles, Wood, Angel, etc. It can't be Buffy or Willow because I hate Will and Buffy would try to kill Buffy before she thought of blackmail sex. Tara's dead so no. Maybe Amy? A gal with no strong loyalty to Buffy who likes to have fun... yeah that could work. Or maybe Kennedy? Things don't work out with Willow so she goes to visit her sister slayer and likes what she sees. Ooh! Ooh! A three-way romance! Amy or Kennedy would be hot. Ooh! Four-way romance! HOTTER!
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  • From saladied on April 05, 2011
    Although I partly agree with Oric13's critique above I thoroughly enjoyed reading chapter 5 (Meeting The Master) and chapter 6 (Makeover - Part 1). The sex scene between Dawn and Faith was incredibly hot and I very much liked Dawn's creative use of magic. Even then I was totally blown away by the 'Makeover' chapter. Awesome! Especially the tattoos were genius thinking, truly inspiring.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2011
    Ok so I didn't think I'd like this pairing but am suprised at how great this story is and how much I'm enjoying this pairing. I was wondering if you've thought of doing another story with this pairing but with Dawn as the sub and Faith as the dom. After how bratty Dawn was with all the stealing and stuff maybe Faith would be the firm hand she needs. But anyway great job so far on this fic and can't wait for your next update:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2011
    Great chapter I can't wait for more please update very soon!roleplaying wise I think it would be fun to see
    catholic school girl faith would be awesome. or faith never had a good relationship with her parents so dawn filling that role would be kinky.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 06, 2011
    wow great fic. can't wait for more, do you plan for any role playing in future chapters? please update soon.
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  • From Oric13 on December 16, 2010
    Part 2 - Learning Her Place: This chapter has some hot scenes, but it doesn't really work for me. It might've worked as chapter 5 or 6, but not as chapter 2.

    I think the problem is that you let Faith submit WAY too soon and easily; she's supposed to have this strong rebellious personality, but you've already turned her into a simpering sub in the SECOND chapter!

    The most interesting part of this storyline would (or at least should) be the way Faith gradually gives herself over to Dawn, as the youngest Summers girl slowly but surely makes Faith her bitch thru the clever use of blackmail, Faith's subconscious need to be punished for the evil she's done, and her own sexy body. But this obviously wouldn't happen overnight. Unfortunately, you pretty much skipped it entirely and went straight to the tamed Faith part of the story.

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  • From ANON - Cal on December 14, 2010
    Awesomely hot chapter. Faith and Dawn are soo hot together! It's a relief to read that this time you're going for a more willing sub than sadistic destruction. Romance and Spanking. Fingers crossed for a happy ending.
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  • From MTL on November 27, 2010
    Super hot. I'm with Cal that it would be nice if it was just F/F for once and as there is no M/F symbol at the beginning hopefully that's what you have in mind. I'm also with Cal on preferring a happy ending, and while you're other stories were hot it would be nice if the story ended up having Dawn and Faith being in more of a traditional relationship, albeit a dom/sub one, as opposed to Faith being just a piece of meat who her top never really grows to care about.

    The ending of the first chapter gives some hope for this and while Dawn sharing Faith with other girls could be fun I hope you keep it as those two sneaking around for as long as possible behind the other's backs as I find the concept really fun, although at the same time I can't wait for little Dawnie to strap on a dildo and fuck her slayer bitch up the butt.

    Anyway I am a huge fan of Dom Dawn and have become a huge fan of Sub Faith through reading your work so I'll probably end up loving the majority of this story no matter where it goes.
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  • From ANON - cal on November 25, 2010
    You really know how to write lesbian domination TL, bravo! I've read your other stuff and they are just sooo intense. Just a few things:

    1) Can it just be girls this time? I know it's degradation and Snyder was a wicked cool choice for the Joyce story, but honestly I thought the fem only scenes were the hottest.
    2) It's S7 so please don't go with the Harbingers and UberVamps. The Oz and Clem stories were wow, but I think it would just be weird.
    3) A Happy Ending for Faith. Breaking Faith had the sultry Bostonian turned into a vengeful slutty vampire and Joyce the succubus milf left our wanton brunette a gangbanged mess. Could Faith have a happy ending. Love seeing her get dominated, honestly Dawn is my favourite choice so far, but can it be less her beaten into submission or magicked into a slave and make it something like her idea of committing to a lover is surrendering herself to them? Cliche but it would just be nice to have a romantic twist instead of "yeah, lets fuck the dark slayer beyond all repair!"

    So yeah, looking forward to seeing more. Love the FaithDawn pairing. I hated Willow, I mean she went full evil and then everyone just lets her walk back in? The S8 comic may have retconned Warren back to life but she still tortured him and she killed Rack and probably a whole heap of police. Point of fact she went worse than Faith ever did and yet they all forgive her? Whedon dropped the ball on that one. Maybe next time round Willow is the one that gets broken...... Joyce made a wicked cool milf but Dawn... Have you seen Michelle Tractenberg in Gossip Girl and Eurotrip? Gorgeous. So yeah...make it nothing but femslash and lets have a happy ending this time.
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  • From Oric13 on November 25, 2010
    Good start, Tom.
    Dawnie sexually dominating the rebellious slayer is definitely an entertaining and also arousing story idea.
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