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By : modeac
  • From Oric13 on November 27, 2010
    Pain from the Past: The flashback scenes were a bit messy/confusing, but this lesbian Dom/sub relationship Cordy is forced to accept seems promising.

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  • From Nooneimportant on November 27, 2010
    I have to say I didn't enjoy the second part compared to the first one or even to the orginal second part you had before.

    It's one thing to contrast Cordy being a bitch with her being a victim but I didn't get that from this part. It felt more like just humilation and emotional torture which quite honestly doesn't seem like something Cordy would put up with in any situation.
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  • From Jackbnimble on July 30, 2010
    Read your review for Hard Lessons. I read a few of Jimmyorthancs fics having been intrigued by the Googlecaptains happy sequals to them all. Frankly judging by their content I suspect he may well be in prison? (thankfully I could then go back and read GC's happy sequals which made me feel better but then I figure that's why she wrote them). Either way, all the links to both authors are dead so I figure they no longer write
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  • From LL72 on March 14, 2010
    Interesting idea. It's also probably more realistic that someone like Cordelia would have ended up in the porn industry rather than as Angel's sidekicks. However it feels very short and there seems a massive jump from chapter 1 softcore to being a seasoned hard core performer
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  • From Nooneimportant on March 12, 2010
    I have to agree with the other reviewers, this feels too much like an end to the story instead of an interlude.

    Also one of the best things about the first part was Cordy's thoughts as she debased herself and further pushed the line of what she'd be willing to do for money. This part didn't have any of that and I found it a little detaching from the story.
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  • From ANON - Xavier Mcleod on March 12, 2010
    I like that you made her a porn star. However I would prefer that you show her being humiliated and being a sub at the start of her porn career. Then slowly and occasionally have her as a dom. Still I like the way you are going. Hope to see more soon.
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  • From Oric13 on March 12, 2010
    Overall it's a pretty good chapter.
    But I think that the "Fan Interlude" idea would've worked best as an epilogue, and the Xena porn parody idea would've worked best as a seventh or eight chapter idea
    You could've given this story a much more gradual build-up with Cordy having to take increasingly degrading jobs, but still has high hopes of becoming a real actress, till she finally forced to give up that dream and goes from taking the occasional soft-core erotic part to doing full blown porn.
    But that isn't going to really work anymore, because we've already "seen" her act in porn.
    And by making this "future" fan interlude a 2nd chapter, you've pretty much spoiled what's going to happen.

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  • From Nooneimportant on March 08, 2010
    Well Cordy looks hot when pissed and you tagged the story to have BDSM. I forsee the role of a leather clad Dom in her future and if the sub ends up being a redhead, I think Cordelia might actually enjoy herself.
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  • From ANON - Xavier Mcleod on March 07, 2010
    I am glad to see that you are thinking of continuing the story. I hope to see chapter two soon. I really like the story and want you to continue the story.
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  • From Oric13 on March 07, 2010
    Interesting idea with plenty of potential.
    I'm curious to see what further humiliations await the former Queen C.
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