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Reviews for The Pack

By : TTrunks
  • From eightftfour on August 09, 2010
    i loved this please write more have him enslave everyone
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  • From thmanwithnoname on July 26, 2010
    An interesting start. I'm looking forward to where you take this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2010
    You must continue. I want to see Buffy and Dawn featured next. And more Cordelia too.
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  • From InvisibleAES on April 18, 2010
    This is a great story but im really wondering where does it go from here? and who else will become a part of the Pack?

    IA
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  • From dabluejay on March 01, 2010
    You the same author from TtH? Either way decent read.

    I think everything went way too fast though. The characters changed too fast and the story moved too fast. Slowing it down may enhance the story a bit. I'll still read the current form though.
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  • From ANON - Brett on February 07, 2010
    Minor detail. Joyce is not a red head so Xander did not pull her by her red hair.
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  • From stevemorgan on December 29, 2009
    i read this the first time, and i have to admit its a lot better, love to see more reluctance from his new pack members though, then when they turn it will be sweeter
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