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Reviews for The Scooby Slave

By : topcat098
  • From Mickelus on August 11, 2013
    I really liked this story up until the last part. I'm glad you wrote that Tara got her pound of flesh, but in my opinion she was just too brutal to Willow. I understand that she felt wronged and violated, but that is just so far out of character for her that I can't accept it. As far as I'm concerned this story ends right before they decide to go to The Bronze. However if in a sequel you write that Tara makes amends for her over-brutality then I will accept the full story. I don't mean to take away from your writing either, I've read all your stories so far and like them, just had a problem with the last little bit of this one.
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  • From ANON - Maxthehobbit on November 13, 2012
    This was very good, especially the way Dawn used psychology to get her way ... spanking Willow and her sister.
    The only thing you left out was a warning ... licking fingers clean after being up an ass would mean eating shit. At the least this causes diarrea and it why people that drink the water or eat food in Mexico get the runs. At worst this can cause cholera which can be deadly.
    I, too have a thing for Willow's butt and general bondage of Willow, she's just too cute to leave alone.

    I also have a copy of dawn's birthday present chapter 3.jpg. One of my favorite pictures. I like the look of her eyes and the way her mouth is open, a very surprised look. Don't remember where I found it, but it's great.
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