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Reviews for Things that go bump in the night

By : inked4chaos
  • From missingviolet on July 08, 2008
    oh man!! no sex??!
    that sux...
    anyways, it was a great update!!
    thank you so very much for the speedy updates!

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  • From animism on July 07, 2008
    The way you write it will be awesome no matter what sex you choose for the child, although since Raya already has a son and a grandson a daughter might be nice. Amazing chapter Raya and Faith are perfect. Thanks for starting my morning off with this great chapter.
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  • From missingviolet on July 07, 2008
    oh my!! it;s getting interesting!!!!
    poor spike horus should be a weee bit nicer to him..
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  • From rachel99 on July 07, 2008
    Hey there. Just wanted to let you know that I like this story, but one little thing, I don't if it's possible or not but, I think there's too much sex and not enough building up to it. But I like it, it's definately different and worth every read. And the bebe, it should be twins!...or a girl. Or Faith should lose it in the final throwdown cuz by what you wrote, Raya is preggo too.
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  • From missingviolet on July 07, 2008
    !! are they going to actually get married and live in a basement??!!
    nice!!
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  • From missingviolet on July 07, 2008
    extremely hot!!
    damn...
    love the dominant wolfy thing...
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  • From missingviolet on July 07, 2008
    yay!! preggy faithy!!
    i really do hope raya can protect them.
    it would have been really funny to see faith actually sitting on raya's face!

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  • From animism on July 07, 2008
    Very hot!!! Great story, fabulous characters...............outstanding.
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  • From missingviolet on July 06, 2008
    yay!! thx for another great update..
    can faith n raya get any hotter??
    dying for the next chapter.. pls dont keep me waiting too long...

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  • From animism on July 06, 2008
    wow! Very well written.
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  • From DaPhoenix on July 05, 2008
    Faith and Raya together is so hot. Good Job.
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  • From missingviolet on July 05, 2008
    that was both funny and hot!!
    thx for the update!!
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  • From missingviolet on July 05, 2008
    nice keep it coming!!
    go raya!!
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  • From animism on July 05, 2008
    Fabulous story, very funny. I am looking forward to your next update.
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  • From missingviolet on July 04, 2008
    nice update!
    very good story u got there...
    but i noticed some spelling mistakes here and there..
    maybe u could get a beta or a spell check..
    i would love to beta for u but my english isnt so good (not my 1st lang)
    anyways.. keep up the great work!
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