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Reviews for Double Your Pleasure, Double Your Fun

By : Kinetickid
  • From missingviolet on July 04, 2008
    very very hot..
    strong tara's gotta be my fav
    but do u have any more fics coming up with faith in them??
    it'll be nice to have strong tara with lil faithy.. heehee
    anyways, u rock..
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  • From WotanAnubis on July 02, 2008
    Tara on Buffy on Tara? I think it's safe to say I approve and very much so.

    However, I wasn't a big fan of the Riley-bashing. I also noticed a slight... I'm not sure what to call it... Department of Redundancy Department problem. Take, for example, the sentence: Joyce orders, deciding to take over, giving Buffy a chance to calm down, the guilt almost a tangible presence around her daughter at the fact she thinks she?s to blame for Tara being hurt. We've established a mere few sentences before that Buffy is feeling guilty about Tara getting hurt. Do we really need to be told the exact same thing again already? In my opinion, cutting off the at the fact she thinks she?s to blame for Tara being hurt. part would have improved the sentence a lot.

    Other than that, keep up the good work.
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